Good story overall. Thanks for sharing! I would rather have seen Carlisle's story as a separate fic, but it was still a nice addition. I would have loved an epilogue for B and E since they had so many major life moments to share

Wonderful story… thank you for sharing your talent

Just heart wrenching.

Ohhh I wished I had left this story... I hate WIP’s...

Beautiful story, loved everything up to this stage. Just can’t wait to see what happens next!

Such a great story!

Really great story, very well written. I was sad and happy. Although I think Edward inherited some of his mothers bi-polar personality. Thanks for writing and sharing

Loved it so much regards Toni

OMG so no Happy EndingFor Bree

I’m amazed! Wow! Really need to read the A/N not sure if this is based on a real movie LOL because I’ll want to watch it . Loved it!

I just started the story today! And I’m impressed. Can’t stop reading.

An amazing story! I loved watching Edward and Bella fall in love!

I had to stop reading as soon as I begun reading this chapter... WHAT THE FUCK!

You kissed a dude, when you had Edward in the same fucking building, probably not even 10 yards away from you, and you expect for him to react normally?

I gotta take a break... until the last two chapters, it's been pretty ok read, a little over dramatic here and there.. but this takes the cake..

First off, Being friends with someone you had previous romantic intanglments with just doesn't fucking work.

AND SECOND, why in the fuck would she fucking kiss him? I read the reviews before I choose to comment... And they all hope Edward doesn't over react? What the fuck? Her and Edward have OBVIOUS feelings for each other and opening up more and more to each other..

Why in the blue hell would she give a guy a 'goodbye' kiss'? With Edward in the same fucking building no less.

I feel like this was forced onto the characters by the writer, in other words. You are MAKING YOUR OWN CHARACTERS ACT OOC! Go fucking figure.. Bella would not fucking kiss him giving how the story has been developing.

And on the sexual assault stuff, 'cope' by coming forward, you are no longer talking about Edward, so therefore, come forward and put that motherfucker in jail.

Fuck the public and 'large number of people', you are choosing to let a rapist roam free by not going to the police so they can run a rape kit on you and get his or her dna off of you so he can be put in jail.

I realize people react differently, but one SHOULD never not go to the police. The longer you wait, the less of a chance he has to be put behind bars.

Is Heidi his former Domme?

Truly a great story!