|Reviews for Onscreen Chemistry|
| SanguineTaurean chapter 8 . 12/22/2015
Looks like ole Eddie boy has some feelings for Bella after all. lol That was a great scene, and I really like Alice as the director.
| SanguineTaurean chapter 7 . 12/21/2015
Edward is a cocky spoiled arse on set and in real life. Even though he has the hots for Bella! lol I like Emmett in this one, and Demetri so far. Esme and Angela are Bella's life lines so I'm glad she has them.
| quisha1991 chapter 32 . 12/16/2015
I kind of see where this is going
| quisha1991 chapter 30 . 12/15/2015
I hope they killed her and dumped her body somewhere
| quisha1991 chapter 23 . 12/15/2015
Never expected that... I knew it was something drastic, but definitely not that
| quisha1991 chapter 8 . 12/14/2015
Right now would be good for an EPOV
| bella0609 chapter 31 . 12/10/2015
Thank you so much! Loved the story :) An adorable couple!
| bella0609 chapter 30 . 12/7/2015
OH! I thought Bella was going to get shot! I was so sure of it. The foreshadowing, the similarities with the film and their lives. It was going that way. So very happy she wasn't. I didn't like Heidi. Paul and Jake should never have followed all the things she said, but two wrongs don't make a right...Bottom line. I'm like Bella. I feel bad for what will become of her.
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/5/2015
I think of the word "shattered". That could be related to a lot of different things right now in the story. I would rather wait and find out what your meaning is...
| bella0609 chapter 29 . 12/7/2015
I can't believe that Bree died! Oh no! Bella's not going to die, too? IS SHE?
So was Didi in on this? Or was Heidi holding her captive? EDWARD GET HOME!
| bella0609 chapter 28 . 12/7/2015
Looks like Heidi is taken care of, I hope. Although, $5,000 won't be a lot of money for her. She could sell the car/truck. Hopefully, that's the last we see between Heidi/Jacob.
Edward's gonna have a hard time not being an island and remembering to share his feelings. Baby steps...
| bella0609 chapter 27 . 12/6/2015
I love their time together! So happy they didn't go "all the way", but just took care of each others' needs. Loved the chapter :)
| bella0609 chapter 26 . 12/6/2015
Yes, my hubby initiated sex with my while I was sleeping. In the dream I was having sex. But it played out as a baseball game... pretty erotic really... I enjoyed immensely :)
Looking forward to Jasper finding more than just the flash drive, but something more incriminating against Heidi!
| bella0609 chapter 25 . 12/6/2015
Hopefully Edward starts realizing that his family is on his side along with Bella.
Really loving the story :)
| bella0609 chapter 24 . 12/6/2015
Oh no! Edward! Did he come in too late? He had to hear that they were saying goodbye, right? He had to hear that she broke off with him...