Reviews for Onscreen Chemistry
SanguineTaurean chapter 15 . 12/22/2015
It seeeems that Edward's body is defying his outward persona during the sex scene with Bella. I had to laugh a little when he tried to apologize for his body reacting to her but got embarrassed and stopped. Little head didn't get the memo from big head! lol Then he comes knocking at her dressing room door with a peace offering of Coke Zero. Guess he was surprised to find Bella wrapped in Demetri's arms. I can only guess what happened, or didn't happen, when Jessica was the chosen lamb at the end of Edward's party.
SanguineTaurean chapter 14 . 12/22/2015
Oh, Mama! That was a steamy "scene!"
SanguineTaurean chapter 10 . 12/22/2015
Hmmm...wondering why Edward had a complete turnabout in his new civility towards Bella... He's going to give her whiplash. lol
SanguineTaurean chapter 8 . 12/22/2015
Looks like ole Eddie boy has some feelings for Bella after all. lol That was a great scene, and I really like Alice as the director.
SanguineTaurean chapter 7 . 12/21/2015
Edward is a cocky spoiled arse on set and in real life. Even though he has the hots for Bella! lol I like Emmett in this one, and Demetri so far. Esme and Angela are Bella's life lines so I'm glad she has them.
quisha1991 chapter 32 . 12/16/2015
I kind of see where this is going
quisha1991 chapter 30 . 12/15/2015
I hope they killed her and dumped her body somewhere
quisha1991 chapter 23 . 12/15/2015
Never expected that... I knew it was something drastic, but definitely not that
quisha1991 chapter 8 . 12/14/2015
Right now would be good for an EPOV
bella0609 chapter 31 . 12/10/2015
Thank you so much! Loved the story :) An adorable couple!
bella0609 chapter 30 . 12/7/2015
OH! I thought Bella was going to get shot! I was so sure of it. The foreshadowing, the similarities with the film and their lives. It was going that way. So very happy she wasn't. I didn't like Heidi. Paul and Jake should never have followed all the things she said, but two wrongs don't make a right...Bottom line. I'm like Bella. I feel bad for what will become of her.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/5/2015
I think of the word "shattered". That could be related to a lot of different things right now in the story. I would rather wait and find out what your meaning is...
Im chicken...
bella0609 chapter 29 . 12/7/2015
I can't believe that Bree died! Oh no! Bella's not going to die, too? IS SHE?
So was Didi in on this? Or was Heidi holding her captive? EDWARD GET HOME!
bella0609 chapter 28 . 12/7/2015
Looks like Heidi is taken care of, I hope. Although, $5,000 won't be a lot of money for her. She could sell the car/truck. Hopefully, that's the last we see between Heidi/Jacob.
Edward's gonna have a hard time not being an island and remembering to share his feelings. Baby steps...
bella0609 chapter 27 . 12/6/2015
I love their time together! So happy they didn't go "all the way", but just took care of each others' needs. Loved the chapter :)
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