Reviews for Onscreen Chemistry
bella0609 chapter 31 . 12/10/2015
Thank you so much! Loved the story :) An adorable couple!
bella0609 chapter 30 . 12/7/2015
OH! I thought Bella was going to get shot! I was so sure of it. The foreshadowing, the similarities with the film and their lives. It was going that way. So very happy she wasn't. I didn't like Heidi. Paul and Jake should never have followed all the things she said, but two wrongs don't make a right...Bottom line. I'm like Bella. I feel bad for what will become of her.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/5/2015
I think of the word "shattered". That could be related to a lot of different things right now in the story. I would rather wait and find out what your meaning is...
Im chicken...
bella0609 chapter 29 . 12/7/2015
I can't believe that Bree died! Oh no! Bella's not going to die, too? IS SHE?
So was Didi in on this? Or was Heidi holding her captive? EDWARD GET HOME!
bella0609 chapter 28 . 12/7/2015
Looks like Heidi is taken care of, I hope. Although, $5,000 won't be a lot of money for her. She could sell the car/truck. Hopefully, that's the last we see between Heidi/Jacob.
Edward's gonna have a hard time not being an island and remembering to share his feelings. Baby steps...
bella0609 chapter 27 . 12/6/2015
I love their time together! So happy they didn't go "all the way", but just took care of each others' needs. Loved the chapter :)
bella0609 chapter 26 . 12/6/2015
Yes, my hubby initiated sex with my while I was sleeping. In the dream I was having sex. But it played out as a baseball game... pretty erotic really... I enjoyed immensely :)

Looking forward to Jasper finding more than just the flash drive, but something more incriminating against Heidi!
bella0609 chapter 25 . 12/6/2015
Hopefully Edward starts realizing that his family is on his side along with Bella.
Really loving the story :)
bella0609 chapter 24 . 12/6/2015
Oh no! Edward! Did he come in too late? He had to hear that they were saying goodbye, right? He had to hear that she broke off with him...
bella0609 chapter 23 . 12/6/2015
I hate, hate, hate Heidi! I wonder why it took her so long to go after him? Bella needs to find a way to fix this. Will she tell Rose? Not Emmett :( He would be relentless. Charlie! Maybe he would be helpful. She has to find a way to save him - just like Bree is saving Riley :)
bella0609 chapter 22 . 12/6/2015
Emmett's pretty crazy with the prank :)
I love Edward and Bella's interaction in her dressing room. They almost became the item we thought they should be... I think Edward is beginning to trust her a little bit...
bella0609 chapter 21 . 12/6/2015
Well...
I'm thinking that he is super attracted to Bella, but Heidi has something over him that makes him have to stay or be with her... He won't allow himself the chance to step outside the box...
I can't figure out what happened...? Heidi must know things about his father and himself.
bella0609 chapter 19 . 12/5/2015
I don't like it - don't like it one bit
bella0609 chapter 18 . 12/5/2015
Well, he acted very nicely... no details given or an unloading of emotions, but, he did apologize for his actions... that was nice.
bella0609 chapter 17 . 12/5/2015
Is this the old girlfriend? Is she back in this life now?
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