|Reviews for Onscreen Chemistry|
| bella0609 chapter 26 . 12/6/2015
Yes, my hubby initiated sex with my while I was sleeping. In the dream I was having sex. But it played out as a baseball game... pretty erotic really... I enjoyed immensely :)
Looking forward to Jasper finding more than just the flash drive, but something more incriminating against Heidi!
| bella0609 chapter 25 . 12/6/2015
Hopefully Edward starts realizing that his family is on his side along with Bella.
Really loving the story :)
| bella0609 chapter 24 . 12/6/2015
Oh no! Edward! Did he come in too late? He had to hear that they were saying goodbye, right? He had to hear that she broke off with him...
| bella0609 chapter 23 . 12/6/2015
I hate, hate, hate Heidi! I wonder why it took her so long to go after him? Bella needs to find a way to fix this. Will she tell Rose? Not Emmett :( He would be relentless. Charlie! Maybe he would be helpful. She has to find a way to save him - just like Bree is saving Riley :)
| bella0609 chapter 22 . 12/6/2015
Emmett's pretty crazy with the prank :)
I love Edward and Bella's interaction in her dressing room. They almost became the item we thought they should be... I think Edward is beginning to trust her a little bit...
| bella0609 chapter 21 . 12/6/2015
I'm thinking that he is super attracted to Bella, but Heidi has something over him that makes him have to stay or be with her... He won't allow himself the chance to step outside the box...
I can't figure out what happened...? Heidi must know things about his father and himself.
| bella0609 chapter 19 . 12/5/2015
I don't like it - don't like it one bit
| bella0609 chapter 18 . 12/5/2015
Well, he acted very nicely... no details given or an unloading of emotions, but, he did apologize for his actions... that was nice.
| bella0609 chapter 17 . 12/5/2015
Is this the old girlfriend? Is she back in this life now?
| bella0609 chapter 16 . 12/4/2015
I think Emmett is pushing things a little too much!
| bella0609 chapter 15 . 12/4/2015
Edward and Jessica. She didn't go into much detail at all - like there wasn't much to tell...
| bella0609 chapter 14 . 12/4/2015
I don't know if Edward "got his" I hope he... well, uh, he's so closed off. He certainly had to act like he enjoyed it.
He was so upset that this was Bella's first time... I wonder what happened between him and "his girl" from long ago...
| bella0609 chapter 13 . 12/4/2015
Edward's having a hard time keeping Bella at arms length, huh? Angela is the best for Bella. Can't believe Renee left when she was only 5 months old...
| bella0609 chapter 12 . 12/3/2015
E/B's developing relationship? After the conversation today, it doesn't look like they have any relationship now or ever!
| bella0609 chapter 11 . 12/3/2015
You think Edward is making out with some girl?