Reviews for Onscreen Chemistry
BellaBrat chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
This was a very good chapter! Really draws your readers in
xxxbulletxxx chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Bella got shot!?
smartypants trip4 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I cant wait for the next update!
Mandita 93 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
ugh i hope whatever happened just now brings them together! did she get shot? or did james' character trip and she fell the wrong way? I can't wait to read more! update ASAP please
ginkgo00 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
crazy cliffie! am wondering if something else happened. did she say Edwards green eyes? I'll go back and check...
jansails chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I bet Em has a long list of things he'd like to embarrass Edward over.
The shaving cream was cute, had it been whipped cream...
The scene went wrong, didn't it?
Bella's really unconscious.
jansails/jan2
NPakus chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Still so much to learn about this Edward...hanging on for what's next.
team rob chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
:)
too bad Jessica had such bad timing
seems that Heidi was on the phone
confused at the end when Edward was concerned about her. didn't know he was there a riley
2brown-eyes chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Sounds like he was about to open up. Now I am sure Heidi is blackmailing him about something. I Hope Bella is all right. Maybe it will be the push for Edward to open up more.
NanStew chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
How could you leave it there? Grrrrrrrrrrrrr... hate cliffies, not really. :-)
2brown-eyes chapter 21 . 2/5/2014
Game of Chicken? Makes me wonder if Edward might have played in college and the outcome was bad. Like the other person died or injured badly. I think Heidi knows and is blackmailing him.
stupidlamb2010 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Oh no did she get hurt for real? Loving it. Update soon
MrsDuckyFuzzles chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
WHAT IN THE HELL HAPPENED
ibleedscarletandgray chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I'm not a fan of kiss blocking! Ugh - they were so close! And what just happened? Is it Bree or Bella? Ruh roh. Love your story - more, please!
NanStew chapter 21 . 2/5/2014
Expecting something big coming up soon.
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