|Reviews for Onscreen Chemistry|
| BellaBrat chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
This was a very good chapter! Really draws your readers in
| xxxbulletxxx chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Bella got shot!?
| smartypants trip4 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I cant wait for the next update!
| Mandita 93 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
ugh i hope whatever happened just now brings them together! did she get shot? or did james' character trip and she fell the wrong way? I can't wait to read more! update ASAP please
| ginkgo00 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
crazy cliffie! am wondering if something else happened. did she say Edwards green eyes? I'll go back and check...
| jansails chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I bet Em has a long list of things he'd like to embarrass Edward over.
The shaving cream was cute, had it been whipped cream...
The scene went wrong, didn't it?
Bella's really unconscious.
| NPakus chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Still so much to learn about this Edward...hanging on for what's next.
| team rob chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
too bad Jessica had such bad timing
seems that Heidi was on the phone
confused at the end when Edward was concerned about her. didn't know he was there a riley
| 2brown-eyes chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Sounds like he was about to open up. Now I am sure Heidi is blackmailing him about something. I Hope Bella is all right. Maybe it will be the push for Edward to open up more.
| NanStew chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
How could you leave it there? Grrrrrrrrrrrrr... hate cliffies, not really. :-)
| 2brown-eyes chapter 21 . 2/5/2014
Game of Chicken? Makes me wonder if Edward might have played in college and the outcome was bad. Like the other person died or injured badly. I think Heidi knows and is blackmailing him.
| stupidlamb2010 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Oh no did she get hurt for real? Loving it. Update soon
| MrsDuckyFuzzles chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
WHAT IN THE HELL HAPPENED
| ibleedscarletandgray chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I'm not a fan of kiss blocking! Ugh - they were so close! And what just happened? Is it Bree or Bella? Ruh roh. Love your story - more, please!
| NanStew chapter 21 . 2/5/2014
Expecting something big coming up soon.