Reviews for Onscreen Chemistry
renesmee.carlie.cullen1313 chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
love this and i fucking hate heidi! i feel so bad 4 edward 2 but at least he has bella now... plz update soon!
vivx-chan chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
Heidi is a Bitch, I feel like killing her! The end was really sweet, but I wonder when Bella will think about her relationship with Demitri...

Keep writing and posting.
CeCe chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
God, he's in deep shit now. :-(

But more than anything I feel angry at Heidi and the situation, and helpless for Edward.

Right now I can only think of him telling the world about the video, but he doesn't want to. I think he might have a couple of things he might do.

He could take the first step and talk to the police about this, telling them he's being blackmailed. That in itself it's illegal, so they might be able to do something. After that, he could actually tell the truth in an interview, a serious one. Telling he has been blackmailed for something in his past, etc. That might take the power off of Heidi's hands and get on the public's side.

Finally, he could simply threaten Heidi (and record the entire conversation, jic). If she were to expose the video, that would be seen as distribution of pornography, which is also illegal. Also, and I'm not sure about this, wasn't Edward a minor when this happened? And wasn't Heidi 2 years older, making her legal? So, in the end she would be not only distributing pornography, but pornography with a minor. Also, having sex with one is also illegal depending on the state. If we add the fact that there were other people in the video, well... they could go after them as well (especially if they are legal as well), and I hardly think they'd be happy with Heidi for this.

I know this might be a stretch, but if they can be serious about this, and even have a lawyer with them, it might scare Heidi off. She will have to give them the copies, and if at any moment the video is released, she will be arrested (they can make her believe that). They can even have her sign a paper for this.

I don't know, right now it might be better to play the game against her than fighting her upfront.

I still wish she went to jail though.
Guest chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
Heidi is f******* crazy! She needs to be charged with blackmail! And poor Edward. ...I just want ton hug him! Lucky Bella, she gets to hold & kiss him!
FF13 chapter 23 . 2/9/2014
Hello again,
Thanks for your help - I have managed to read it and wow. First point is I hope your injuries have gone and you don't suffer any pain.
Secondly, the chapter was incredibly written, and it was very clever. You combine, angst, drama, tension and inject love and humour into it! I feel so sorry for Edward - it would not surprise me if he was not only drunk but drugged, or used the date rape drug, which apparently has the same affects as if you have been drinking [that's what I have heard, fortunately, never encountered it]. I think it is terrible that someone suffered this. I will say your story made me realise that its not just girls that suffer this, but also guys do too. I think it is terrible. I would like to apologise to any reader who has been a similar victim as Edward has - it is terrible.
No doubt you have something very clever to stop Heidi [perhaps Bella and Edward could get the camera crew and perhaps Alice to rig something up, to stop Heidi reveal the footage]
I loved the chapter, and what Edward says makes a lot of sense - I wonder if Emmett knows the whole story.
I love how Edward stayed with Bella and did not leave her side, until Laura [I love this character!] removed the Catheter.
I'm rambling now - so sorry :(
Thank you for another amazing chapter, its sad but also poetic that it takes Bella to be incapacitated for Edward to tell her his story, and show his feelings.
Cant wait to read more
Take care xx
Guest chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
I am absolutely in love with this story .
Guest chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
Yikes poor Edward! Love your story.
Guest chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
Like this!
Naerts chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
I'd like to kick Heidi in the ass
Guest chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
Absolutely fascinating.
This chapter made me so sad for Edward! :(
Iffy chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
Edward's story is really sad. One thing I don't get though is how he could be that infatuated with Bella. It just doesn't progress very naturally. But maybe that's just because I really like the epic romances...
Guest chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
Heidi is a despicable human being, and just like Bella and all the other fans of this story my heart breaks for what Edward went through.
islandgirrrl chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
Love it! I'm totally enjoying this story. I discovered it a couple of days ago on ADF. I'm enjoying their ride and the pacing (like you, I'm not in a hurry to get to the "relationship all settled" stage). Thanks for sharing!
MK543 chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
I could have thought of 10 ways to remedy Edward's tough situation. In the real legal world, the one with the most money wins. Still, I like to send him a song: Imagine Dragons, Demons:

I wanna hide the truth
I wanna shelter you
But with the beast inside
There’s nowhere we can hide
JKG25 chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
Edward could easily beat Heidi at the game she is playing. Could tell his story in an exclusive interview or something, then she couldn't hold it over him. I'm sure Rosalie could spin it or something. I get he is afraid but I think he should fight back. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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