Reviews for Onscreen Chemistry
BellaBrat chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
This was a very good chapter! Really draws your readers in
xxxbulletxxx chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Bella got shot!?
smartypants trip4 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I cant wait for the next update!
Mandita 93 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
ugh i hope whatever happened just now brings them together! did she get shot? or did james' character trip and she fell the wrong way? I can't wait to read more! update ASAP please
ginkgo00 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
crazy cliffie! am wondering if something else happened. did she say Edwards green eyes? I'll go back and check...
jansails chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I bet Em has a long list of things he'd like to embarrass Edward over.
The shaving cream was cute, had it been whipped cream...
The scene went wrong, didn't it?
Bella's really unconscious.
NPakus chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Still so much to learn about this Edward...hanging on for what's next.
team rob chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
too bad Jessica had such bad timing
seems that Heidi was on the phone
confused at the end when Edward was concerned about her. didn't know he was there a riley
2brown-eyes chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Sounds like he was about to open up. Now I am sure Heidi is blackmailing him about something. I Hope Bella is all right. Maybe it will be the push for Edward to open up more.
NanStew chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
How could you leave it there? Grrrrrrrrrrrrr... hate cliffies, not really. :-)
2brown-eyes chapter 21 . 2/5/2014
Game of Chicken? Makes me wonder if Edward might have played in college and the outcome was bad. Like the other person died or injured badly. I think Heidi knows and is blackmailing him.
stupidlamb2010 chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
Oh no did she get hurt for real? Loving it. Update soon
MrsDuckyFuzzles chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
ibleedscarletandgray chapter 22 . 2/5/2014
I'm not a fan of kiss blocking! Ugh - they were so close! And what just happened? Is it Bree or Bella? Ruh roh. Love your story - more, please!
NanStew chapter 21 . 2/5/2014
Expecting something big coming up soon.
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