|Reviews for When It Rains|
| guest chapter 9 . 3/5
Ohhhhh thank you for updating. Great job as always! I can't wait until you update again! :-)
| SChimes chapter 9 . 3/5
Oh my god she did NOT! Haha SHARON! That was insanely brilliant! And also, desperate - no wonder Taylor threw a fit. But GENIUS!
I'm so happy she gets to keep him. I mean... not that things aren't still awful with them, but at least that huge obstacle is out of the way. Now we can get on to more Rusty shaming! (i can't seem to get enough of that!) And more aftermathy things! And...did I mention how I love this story?
The scene in Taylor's office was perfect, with everyone's reactions and Emma's thoughts (ohhh, Emma), and of course Provenza laughing at the stunt that Sharon pulled. And then the private scene with Sharon and Rusty was AMAZING... the 'when I said I loved you, I meant unconditionally' just broke my heart... so perfect. And I'm glad he got to hear that, even though he's a dumb kid who did everything wrong :P. I hope eventually he works his way up to finally telling Sharon what pretty much everyone else in the WORLD knows. (but her, of course.)
So I'd seen the alert in my inbox a couple of days ago, but I was away with limited interwebz, and you can imagine the kind of nailbiting that went on knowing that this had been posted and I couldn't read it... but SO WORTH THE WAIT! Amazing, as always!
| Force Unbroken chapter 9 . 3/4
Ohh, thank God, they let him stay. Go Sharon! You lay down the law!
I loved this so much. As always. And I totally wish I wasn't at work right now so I could give you one of those lovely long reviews I know you like, but alas, I am on the clock. :/ But! I love this, and I love you, and YAY SHARON AND RUSTY ARE BACK HOME! :D
| airlock goddess chapter 9 . 3/4
Nicely done having Sharon toss the Johnson Rule into the discussion like a hand grenade. Exactly what she would do.
| CreoleGurl chapter 9 . 3/4
Love the interactions. Thanks for sharing.
| Megan429 chapter 9 . 3/4
This was so good. Provenza knew all too well what Sharon was doing! All that time auditing Major Crimes has served her well. Using the "Johnson Rule" to keep Rusty-well played Captain Raydor, well played.
| Nevada11 chapter 9 . 3/4
| murphycat chapter 9 . 3/4
Well written chapter.
| guest chapter 8 . 3/3
Please update! Love this story
| guest chapter 8 . 2/26
Again absolutely wonderful, you just pull me in and I can't stop reading.
| Force Unbroken chapter 8 . 2/24
Of COURSE Sharon would think she could sit up all night and watch Rusty and be all aloof and perfect and not get tired. Sleep is for mortals, not for the HBIC of badassery! *snorts and watches sarcasm drip off statement onto the floor* Stubborn woman. Thank God she didn't actually faceplant, because that would have been painful (Rusty's couch faceplant aside). SHARONNN... *shakes fist at her*
This was so perfect. Completely heartbreaking in that poor Rusty's still learning just how bad he screwed up and poor Sharon can't trust Rusty AT ALL and poor Provenza has to endure the both of them being idiots (well, maybe not that last one quite so much), but still. PERFECT. And at least Rusty's starting to understand that Sharon does still want him around, even if she's fire-spitting mad at him (who wouldn't be?). Poor stupid loveable idiot. I still think he's a moron, but I love him. And we know, Rusty, you don't do drugs, but seeing how you pulled a completely bonehead move while decidedly NOT under the influence of any hallucinogenic... Not your finest hour, pal. Not your finest hour.
And then there's Provenza. He's just consistently perfect and one of my favorite things ever. Between the "Hippies" and the reaction to Sharon's "It's not fair" and the "soft-hearted idiot" mental rants, I am torn between laughing and hugging the grump right out of our human Grumpy Cat. *sighs* How can he be so perfect?
I'm so excited to see what comes next now that they're home! Somehow I get the feeling there's going to be hell to pay, and Rusty deserves it, but Sharon doesn't deserve it, and...and... My feels are so confused! Great job as always! :D
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/24
I love this story, the angst is heartbreaking. Keep it going, I can't wait for more.
| Nevada11 chapter 8 . 2/24
Enjoying this story so much. Another excellent chapter and your pacing of the story is so well done. I love how you don't rush the scenes.
| SChimes chapter 8 . 2/24
The only problem I constantly have with this story is that each chapter ends before I'm ready for it to end. How would you feel about infinitely long chapters ;)?
Oh my god, things are just getting worse, aren't they. Sharon trying to stay awake in that chair just broke my heart! And then Rusty informing her that he could've left if he'd wanted, ARGH - I see the point he was trying to make, but seriously kid, not the way to be earning brownie points right now.
And the car ride...haha oh the car ride. I'm glad that things are being pointed out to Rusty - such as, no security detail for Sharon, and looking for him instead of Stabby, and so much for his credibility - because obviously he HAS lost touch with reality in a spectacular way :P. But am I a horrible person for wanting MORE of that? Like, I want everyone to sit him down and REALLY drive home what he put them through, and then I want someone to spend like, a week explaining in excruciating detail what he put Sharon through :P. Like a whole month of the kind of nights they just had. And her kids thinking she's dying. RUSTYYY.
Poor Sharon. Zero sleep, worst car ride ever, and then she has to battle Emma in the morning. I'm hoping at least Emma will be sympathetic... haha as we tend to use her reactions as a measure of how miserable Sharon is, I think right NOW, she should meet Sharon with smiles and cookies and hugs. 'You want to keep Rusty? Okay, sure. Would you like some hot cocoa with that?'
| alovelyfangirl chapter 7 . 2/17
I am sort of in love with you and your fabulous writing right now. Seriously. You are one of the only people who writes Rusty as he actually is (so many make him all stupid and immature and it drives me CRAZY). Your characters jump off the page-erm... screen- and give me all the good mothership feels. Anyways, I love this and all your other Sharon/Rusty fics. Yes, I read them all; don't look at me like that. I'm in major Rusty/Sharon withdrawal. Save me! Write more!