Reviews for California or Bust!
Yaoi-Beloved chapter 14 . 9/11/2010
OMG I love all of the songs on this chapter and i found some i never knew but love now :D
Silent Elegance chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Oh, the fond memories I have of the time when you were writing this story, it only took you two years! :) Write more of Tequila Sunrise. I think I'm going to proofread this, I already see some mistakes on the first page (all of the commas have been replaced with periods for some reason...)

Talk to you later!
fromage est bon chapter 14 . 11/11/2004
People aren't going to give you heartfelt reviews if you say "I won't post until I get a certain number of reviews." Of course people are just going to say "Post the sequel!" or "Post the next chapter!" This is a very well written story, and I'm very sure that other people think so as well, which is why people kept on reviewing to get you to post the sequel. Also, it's just as annoying when people try to write for an ego-boost. When you write, you write because you love it. That turns readers away if you have to have a certain amount of reviews to keep on writing.
angry fan chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
ARG ! shadi wants the second one shadi has wanted for 3 months arg shadi wants second one shadi demand you post it this month ! shadi this she should go ...
noname chapter 20 . 10/18/2004
that is the best story ive ever read. maybe you could make a career out of this. do you have a sequel yet?
Shinigami's-Girl chapter 2 . 8/24/2004
Please post the sequel! PLEASE!
Amonae chapter 20 . 8/16/2004
I am not amused
acvrebel2 chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
Please post the sequel!
acvrebel2 chapter 18 . 8/16/2004
Please! Post the sequel!
acvrebel2 chapter 19 . 8/16/2004
Please post the sequel soon! Please please please!
CaptainHoshiko chapter 19 . 8/15/2004
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CaptainHoshiko chapter 11 . 8/15/2004
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CaptainHoshiko chapter 10 . 8/15/2004
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CaptainHoshiko chapter 15 . 8/15/2004
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CaptainHoshiko chapter 16 . 8/15/2004
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