Reviews for Pieces of a Puzzle: Duelist Kingdom
Guest chapter 9 . 3/16
I've been reading fanfiction for a long time and I've got to tell you. You're doing it right! Please continue your story! It's amazing!
Zvezda95 chapter 9 . 2/14
Hi ! Your story is so interesting ! I can't just wait for next
Maybe it's just an impression but I find Maria a little lost : she can't tell than she had an opportunity to take back her voice (ok it's comprehensive) but she didn't tell about pegasus to her friends. I love her relation with Yami, she is a little like an guardian for him, but Yami can help her to her courage for her voice (sorry my english is horrible)
Well I hope you will not give up this wonderful fiction and send the next chapter soon ;)
See you !
SilverLinedApathy chapter 9 . 1/29
I completely binge-read this entire series over the past few days. It was really great to see your writing style become more honed over time, and I love the way you have worked an OC into the plot without disrupting it. As a college student myself, I totally empathize with how hard it is to keep turning out chapters while in school and working. I hope you are able to find time to keep updating, however! This is a good story, and Maria is a likable OC whose temper makes her much less of a Mary Sue than one might find in fics, so I really hope you keep going!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/6
Okay where are you? You promised you'd update soon and you haven't don that. What gives?
RoseThorn1234 chapter 9 . 12/14/2014
Awesome! I can't wait to see what happens. This is very interesting! Go MariaXYami !
lostangel21 chapter 9 . 9/2/2014
I am really into this story. Can't wait for an update!
FleurSuoh chapter 9 . 7/29/2014
Really like your story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
DragonClanMaster chapter 9 . 7/25/2014
this is a very good story.
Heaven'sKnight15 chapter 9 . 7/24/2014
Nice chapter can't wait for 10!
Guest chapter 9 . 6/6/2014
Hello, I just read the whole first series an d these 9 chapters and I loved them! I hope you will uodate the next chapter soon because I am really looking forward to reading it _
DayDreamerDreaming247 chapter 9 . 6/3/2014
Ooh snap! Maria's out of her meds. I wonder where this takes us in the story. So happy to see you updating daily again
Guest chapter 9 . 6/3/2014
Plz plz I beg of u, plz finish this story, pretty plz with a cherry on top
Applejax XD chapter 9 . 6/3/2014
wow, i was not expecting pegasus to save maria, i cant wait for the next chappie XD
LeafeonLover chapter 9 . 6/3/2014
Oh no not those rhyming brothers usally I think rhyming is funny but with them it's just plain annoying
Something bad is going to happen to Maria if she has no medicine . tea nearly freaked out of course she would yell out to everyone
I'm glad Maria is there never like tea to begin with
FireWing Pegasus chapter 9 . 6/2/2014
not a shadow game, but they will just be lost in the maze, good job though, more pwease
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