Gfkys you dumbass shithead.

Lool, people like "dude" and "takamura" kill me . Fuck em dude, keep writing your stories, there great no matter what you do. If people don't like then they don't have to read

What the fuck. I don't care what you write about, but incest, especially done in a way such as this, is not alright. "I need to teach them sex personally." NO. That mindset leads the child to believe that it is NORMAL to accept sex, because they're "Trying to make you learn." for their own pleasure. If you have to use this episode at least make it an AU or some shit. Where, you know, they aren't mother and child.

Nice

That was awful and disgusting.

It's interesting to see you do some non-futa stuff. On an unrelated note, are you watching Kill la Kill? If you aren't, you should. It's too new to be dubbed not English, but you ca. Find subbed episodes online. You really need to watch it. May me to a Futa Zone chapter of it.

Hm, not the norm, but I enjoyed it! Good job, King!

Psh! Like you said, it was very different from your other stories, but your writing is your writing and i enjoyed it. Never watched the Anime, but these characters came to life for me. So good job :)