|Reviews for A Summer To Remember|
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/30/2014
The story left me crying in the end!
| NomadDreamer chapter 11 . 9/20/2014
I enjoyed all of the story but especially the last few chapters which were especially poignant, and beautifully well-written. I hope to read more of your work in the future, so keep up the great writing.
P.S.: I'm very sorry to hear about your friend.
| Anne.girl11 chapter 11 . 9/18/2014
Please don't worry. I loved the story. That's the thing with FanFiction. You can write something and know that even though some people might not like it, it's how you want it to be, so it's perfect. I always review what I want, or how I'd like the story, but in the end... I'll always love it, cause it's your way of writing this and it's your interpretation of how the characters 'are'. i have to change my ways of seeing things and place myself in your shoes, or that of the characters. I knew from the beginning of the story it would probably end like this, just because of the title, so if I didn't like that, or didn't want to try think like the writer, I shouldn't have started reading it in the first place.
But I did. And I'm hlad I did. There's only one thing... Cancer is a cruel thing and you were right when you said life isn't fair, but the thing is... You always have to look at the possitive things. There's also good things in the world besides the loads of cruel things. I'd like an epilogue of Jake. Maybe of how he coped in the beginning, or how he is, happy or not, after a few years. Or... I don't know. Anything to let us see that even though Marley died and life us cruel. Not everything is.
Most of the time I write a scene or something to give an example of what I'd like or to inspire writers with some of my ideas, but with this I just came up with one sentence, so that's what I'm going to tell you. It's not only for a (possible) epilogue, but also for real.
There can't be a rainbow without any rain.
Of course I didn't make this up myself, but with your story... It kinda fits. The whole 'after the rain comes the sun' thing is too standard and this just fit's better. It's not like after the bad comes the good, but more like. There us always some good in bad things. You have to concentrate on that feeling to get through life, but there's also always a bit of bad in the good. Just to remind you that even though there is happiness, you should never forget the bad, otherwise they can crush you.
Well, that's everything I have to say, so... Well, I hooe until the epilogue.
And I also wanted to say I'm sorry for your friend. I don't know if he died a long time ago or not, but I know that doesn't matter. It'll always hurt.
| TommyH chapter 10 . 9/17/2014
What a sad ending
| Anne.girl11 chapter 9 . 9/8/2014
So cute. That's all I can say...
I hope Marley won't die in the end, but I'm guessing she will. (I've seen 'A walk to remember') You know, that movie was the only movie where, in the end, I didn't mind that she died. She had done everything in her life what she wanted. I know in other movies that also happens, but this was diffrent. He had been there for her the whole time and although she loved him, she'd had enough time with him to do and be whatever and whoever she wanted to be. I hope you can also reach that point in this story... I know you can.
| TommyH chapter 9 . 9/7/2014
Poor marley and jake
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/6/2014
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/2/2014
Pleaaaaase update STR soooon :))))
| Anne.girl11 chapter 8 . 7/11/2014
Ilove this story soooo much. This chapter was absolutely amazing. What the hell is she hiding? I really wanna know! So... Please post soon!
| TommyH chapter 8 . 7/11/2014
| NomadDreamer chapter 7 . 5/11/2014
I only discovered our story recently am I'm loving it! I wish Jarley were still a thing and that the show hadn't abandoned the newbies! I the title a play on "A Walk to Remebmer?" I'm assuming so?
| Anne.girl11 chapter 7 . 5/10/2014
Wowww what's going on?!
Well, post soon!
| TommyH chapter 7 . 5/10/2014
I wonder what is wrong with her
| TommyH chapter 6 . 4/5/2014
That was sweet
| mka808 chapter 6 . 4/5/2014