Reviews for Exclusion
starboy454 chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
good start
Carling chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Okay, I'm hooked. Normally I read Harry/Draco but I appreciate a well done Hermione/Harry story and this one looks very promising. I can't wait for more.
sortofbored chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Intense. Keep it up.
erm31323 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Very intriguing beginning! I really like the way you've characterized Hermione. She's strong and no-nonsense, but still allows herself a bit of vulnerability with the changing of the scenery to rain and her contemplation about the picture.

Ron going off to find himself is completely believable as well and a plausible way to end their relationship without bashing anyone. I'm excited to see where this goes!
anotherboarduser chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
This may be a good story.

But why is people acting without common sense. Their actions are very weird. Why did the aurors act so blatantly bias and unfair? Why did Harry just insist on doing things himself so stupidly?
Angel Girl5 chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Oh boy.

Somebody disturbed Hermione's happily ever after.
LadyH.J.P.-P chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
ok,i dont understand, are they divorced?
gonekrazy3000 chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
This was a brilliant start :D looking forward to more :)