|Reviews for One More of Us|
| IceCreamFluff chapter 6 . 6/29
I just started reading this story and I LOVE IT SO FAR! I love seeing Jesse and ellie "bond" in this chapter! I'm already shipping it so hard hahaha. You're a really good writer! I love your story so far and I'm gonna continue binge reading it now!
| Crack-jouchan chapter 8 . 12/4/2015
Hahahaha! He called her fat. And she got mad. Heeheehee. I can't be the only one finding it funny everytime he makes her mad, can I?
I think I can understand Ellie's social dependency. She gets attached to people pretty easily cause she's tired of the people she care about leaving her and what not.
I think Lacy is his sis now; he can't be calling his mom by her name right?
| Crack-jouchan chapter 3 . 12/4/2015
Two words. His mom.
Or maybe his sis. I don't know enough at this point, haha.
This... is interesting. I wonder what'll change with one more?
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/16/2015
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/3/2015
| Shankington chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
Cant say good chap cus its almost all from the game. But like how you tell why hes livin with joel instead of Tess so its still like the game where Joel dosent wanna get close to anyone.
| Vengeful Astartes chapter 5 . 3/6/2015
Jesse attitude towards Ellie kind of killed this story for me. It seems really childish and petty, even his reasons for hating her don't make sense.
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/26/2015
I'm sorry to say throughout reading this, Joel took SUCH a backseat role. The thing that made the last of us very unique was the father daughter relationship ellie and joel had. I liked your OC and much about him. But his part was much more dominating then anything else. If his part was equally shared with Joel's, you could see a lot more happening.
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/16/2014
I think Ellie's love for Riley don't have anything to do with her liking girls. I still she's straight. In fact Bruce Straley said Ellie would have still fall for Riley if she was a boy. Techically if a girl loved a another girl that would be called "gay". So I believe it all about Riley's personality not her looks. Riley can be a dog, cat, or an alien and Ellie wouldn't care. That's my two cents and I think you feel this way too. :)
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/30/2014
yay! I'm not the only person who thinks ellie's gay! you are on my side right? right?
| KawaiiSilvy chapter 11 . 9/3/2014
NOO XD Riley was Ellie's first kiss xD
| KawaiiSilvy chapter 4 . 9/2/2014
I kinda saw Jesse and Tess being related,
YAY I WAS FUCKING RIGHT XD
| James chapter 15 . 8/4/2014
:P Ellie is immune and if she kisses someone then i dont think they might get infected , in fact i think that if she kisses someone then they will be immune.
| Hercules8 chapter 15 . 7/10/2014
Whoa, Whoa, whoa. Ellie can't kiss anyone without making them infected. That's weird but the story was great none the less! Awesome job! :)
| Lover's Paradise chapter 15 . 5/9/2014
Ellie IS gay tho, lol.
Or bi...but I am pretty sure she's gay. Neil said so.