|Reviews for 25 Days of Christmas for the First Time Together|
| GG chapter 6 . 1/20
Awwwwwww! Love! :)
| GG chapter 2 . 1/20
This story is so cute! :)
| hazel chapter 5 . 1/4
Please continue and update faster! This storie are so cute!
| KF fan chapter 4 . 1/2
I like this a lot better than the previous chapter. All the little actions described in that one kind of detracted from the point. Here, they're out of the way.
| KF fan chapter 2 . 12/29/2013
It's hard to believe that Jinx didn't know about Christmas trees before this. I sort of picture the students at the HIVE academy being taught about what kind of decorations on a Christmas tree correlate with better presents to steal.
And this is nitpicking, but I really doubt Jinx would say, "Yes, we are sure". 99 times out of 100 in spoken english that would get shortened to "Yeah, we're sure" or "Yes, we're sure" or maybe just "We're sure". It's unnaturally formal the way you have it.
And the whole tree choice is just a bit too explicit.
| KF fan chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
I thought the ending was too explicit. It might have been better if we sort of saw that Jinx had changed her attitude a bit and just inferred how much.
| goodgirl275 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
They weren't OOC, but there was a bit much repetition with their names. Other than that, it was so sweet! I loved it. :-)