Reviews for The Hidden Uchiha
Guest chapter 4 . 6/29
Ok I love the story, I really do, but come on I know naruto is strong and all, but he's tucking 8 years old and the hokage is scared of him. Just saying.
memo ouji-sama chapter 1 . 6/30
Though I'm not really a fan of the pairing, the title and the sharingan naruto part of the summary caught my precious precious attention. I am hoping for a good story. :)
Guest chapter 19 . 5/11
Secuela parte 2 porfa naruto por kurama
eledu.jimenez chapter 19 . 4/11
Biejo el final donde esta mierda esta re bueno
Guest chapter 19 . 2/25
wtf
Guest chapter 11 . 2/25
come on why does naruto not have the rinnengan he has uchiha blood he should have awakend it
when he found out about the mission
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23
wil naruto get the rinnengan because he has uchiha dna and uzumaki
Cezzz chapter 2 . 1/20
Good idea for the plot.

You need to improve your grammar skills a bit.
Theirs vs there
It's vs its
"Could of"- is NOT "could have"
You tend to repeat some words a lot.
There are some commas missing.

All in all, you have the creativity to write very interesting stories you only need more practice.

Sorry if I was harsh or disrespectful.

Regards,

Cezzz
Guest chapter 19 . 1/17
Here's a challenge
*Naruto's special ability for being kyuubi's host is combining elements
*Kyuubi can treat naruto however the writer wants it early on in the story
*Naruto is a prodigy
*he is the same age
*hides skills from the village
*only the third knows
*Naruto has earth wind and water affinities
*pairing is Naruto x fem kyuubi
Enjoy
guest chapter 19 . 1/17
Amazing and well done story
XxPokemonMasterxX chapter 19 . 12/21/2014
No action -_-;
desdelor97 chapter 19 . 12/15/2014
This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work and please update soon.
Kain129 chapter 19 . 12/14/2014
loved it
mikey chapter 19 . 12/9/2014
Awesome chapter, can't wait to see the final fight between Naruto vs Madara and Army. It'll be a good way to show the kids development and the bond they form with Naruto in battle
Kyranol1 chapter 19 . 12/10/2014
Personally, I preferred the story ending at the previous chapter, but it's still awesome to seem some sort of conclusion.
I really wish that Yuugito didnt die, wanted to see their tearful reunion T.T
Awesome story! Great job :)
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