Reviews for The Hidden Uchiha
LordIbtou chapter 19 . 9/8/2015
Amazing fanfic bro . I love it .. but don't you think what he did to rin was a bit cruel ? I mean she's nice and died for her village ... Also i felt that naruto was a bit arrogant .. it wasn't like him ...
DARTH CAEDUS chapter 19 . 8/28/2015
GREAT STORY.
uchihasenju234 chapter 3 . 8/23/2015
BEST BOOK EVER!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/29/2015
Ok I love the story, I really do, but come on I know naruto is strong and all, but he's tucking 8 years old and the hokage is scared of him. Just saying.
memo ouji-sama chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Though I'm not really a fan of the pairing, the title and the sharingan naruto part of the summary caught my precious precious attention. I am hoping for a good story. :)
Guest chapter 19 . 5/11/2015
Secuela parte 2 porfa naruto por kurama
eledu.jimenez chapter 19 . 4/11/2015
Biejo el final donde esta mierda esta re bueno
Guest chapter 19 . 2/25/2015
wtf
Guest chapter 11 . 2/25/2015
come on why does naruto not have the rinnengan he has uchiha blood he should have awakend it
when he found out about the mission
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
wil naruto get the rinnengan because he has uchiha dna and uzumaki
Cezzz chapter 2 . 1/20/2015
Good idea for the plot.

You need to improve your grammar skills a bit.
Theirs vs there
It's vs its
"Could of"- is NOT "could have"
You tend to repeat some words a lot.
There are some commas missing.

All in all, you have the creativity to write very interesting stories you only need more practice.

Sorry if I was harsh or disrespectful.

Regards,

Cezzz
Guest chapter 19 . 1/17/2015
Here's a challenge
*Naruto's special ability for being kyuubi's host is combining elements
*Kyuubi can treat naruto however the writer wants it early on in the story
*Naruto is a prodigy
*he is the same age
*hides skills from the village
*only the third knows
*Naruto has earth wind and water affinities
*pairing is Naruto x fem kyuubi
Enjoy
guest chapter 19 . 1/17/2015
Amazing and well done story
XxPokemonMasterxX chapter 19 . 12/21/2014
No action -_-;
desdelor97 chapter 19 . 12/15/2014
This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work and please update soon.
494 | « Prev Page 1 .. 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 20 .. Last Next »