Awesome chapter, can't wait to see the final fight between Naruto vs Madara and Army. It'll be a good way to show the kids development and the bond they form with Naruto in battle

Personally, I preferred the story ending at the previous chapter, but it's still awesome to seem some sort of conclusion.
I really wish that Yuugito didnt die, wanted to see their tearful reunion T.T
Awesome story! Great job :)

Kinda anticlimactic but it works and I liked it. Especially the turning the bijuu into beings if nature energy. Though that could be an idea. Have a story with Naruto making his own brand of bijuu with nature chakra.

Plot twist his daughters gang up on him for interfering with their love lives

Why did you kill off Yugito for no reason?
She didn't have Matatabi anymore so that was completely pointless

Complete? No epilogue?

well previous chap was the perfect end but still i take it as bonus.
OOO a pokemon story, can PM me when published ?

Your spelling and grammar usage broke down pretty harshly in this fic.

This is the best sharingan!naruto story i ever read!...is there gonna be any next chap or sequel?..cuz im really lookin forward to it

This is one of the best Naruto fics ive ever read. i usually only read fics that are over 100k words but this definetly in my top 5.

You ended it with a bang, a really nice bang :)

I had some problems with your story, sometimes you seemed to forget what you wrote in the last chapter when you were writing a new one.
But I really liked this chapter, a great fight scene with a nice open ending.

Good story

What can I say other than this is one of the worst Naruto is a GOD stories I have read and don't freaking lie and say he isn't GOD-LIKE when he is come on he has only started to learn how to use his sabers in 2 freaking months and you have it where he has no problem fighting a guy who has more experience with a sword than Naruto has been alive oh and how you said Gato was trying to rape a girl ok how can he rape her when you said he was sitting down so yes this is one of the worst Naruto stories where he has the Sharingon as a bloodline which always ends up with Naruto is a GOD OF SHIINOBI so here something next you do another Naruto story do not give either Sharingon or the Rinnagon why is he will always ends up becoming a super strong GOD OF SHIINOBI

The story ok if you like stories where Naruto is pretty god-like at such a young age and don't get me started with how much smarter than any member of the Nara clan but if you have it where Naruto finds the Hiraishin at such a young age then he would be nothing more than a GOD OF SHIINOBI and that is so freaking stupid but I have a question and that is how come just about every author that does a Naruto story where he is born with the Sharingon or the Rinnagon the author always has it where Naruto is made to be GOD-LIKE strong at such a young age and that is freaking stupid

That little comment on "learning not to dispel them all at once, or else you'll get brain damage" explained so much in the anime... (think about how many times he has just expelled them."

I guess the story is just ok my problem with the story is that you made Naruto be way way way way smarter than any member of the Nara clan that and how you made Naruto be GOD-LIKE strong at such a young age hell by the time he is 16 yrs old I bet your going to have him be beyond GOD-LIKE strong but oh well it is your story you can make Naruto to anything you I am just glad you didn't make Naruto to be gay oh and now I know why you made Kurenai so young just so you can have Naruto date her for a bit oh well