Reviews for The Hidden Uchiha
nico2883 chapter 11 . 2/25/2014
I'm confused Naruto and Naruto Yugito because there kurenay or put Kurenai as a match?
Aiten Kaito chapter 8 . 2/24/2014
I'm confused you put in this chapter that Danzo agreed like he was actually still part of Konoha but he is a missing nin. I also find it odd that Naruto didn't seem to even ask why Kurenai was acting different and instead asked other people. Up next Naruto a really smart person who started training sense the age of three couldn't take one small taunt and instead reveals a secret that he tried so hard to keep prior to now then used the Tsukuyomi which in no way affects the memories of people to make them forget. In wave you had him reveal a lot of his power to the genin for no apparent reason he could have easily just told the Jounin at a later time. You also said that this wasn't Naruto's first kill it was some missing nin that Itachi made him kill but he also killed a bunch of Uchiha so revealing that he killed those people was pointless when you already showed he killed some one in an earlier chapter which you also said was his first kill. I'll admit that this has been an interesting story so far but I notice you keep putting sentences that contradict what you have put prior these weren't the only ones that I noticed but I can't remember what the others were.
CreepySnake chapter 10 . 2/24/2014
Amazing chapter. Though it felt abit rushed but great nonetheless. I see you have taken the kurenai idea from *ahem* Masters of genjutsu *ahem* or something but still it was a fine choice. Looking forward to part II. Please post it soon ;)
REVANOFSITHLORD chapter 11 . 2/23/2014
you next month or two
anarion87 chapter 10 . 2/23/2014
great story can't wait for the next part
Portnoy SP chapter 11 . 2/23/2014
what no confrunting kurenai if i was him i would b soo pissed id b like bitch stay away from me n ma family we are not friends. also 2 months :( thats wayy to long for me to wait for this story i love it :)
Jyuubi no Naruto chapter 10 . 2/23/2014
Very nicely done with this chapter very nicely done
RandomWriter21 chapter 11 . 2/23/2014
That was an awesome read, I look forward to part two.
Fuck-all-nazai-grammer-asshole chapter 11 . 2/23/2014
pretty good can't wait for you to make part 2 to bad he's not gonna be with Fu since his first stop taki though
ec-direwolf chapter 11 . 2/23/2014
I'm a little confused, why is Kurenai listed in the pairing if she is not in the pairing?
RINNESHARINGAN chapter 10 . 2/23/2014
awesome chapter man...didn't expect this to happen...well written...just an advice when u post new chapter for the 2nd part..pls post it in this fic as 11th chapter that u have uploaded the new fic
SilveerKnighT chapter 10 . 2/23/2014
Intersting i hope you update soon
Masrur chapter 10 . 2/23/2014
The old monkey screwed up
idea.getthe chapter 10 . 2/23/2014
Any training can do but please NO GODLIKE... And why are this story under complete?
Uchiha Senju Naruto chapter 10 . 2/23/2014
Definitely a good chapter! Revealed a lot of stuff, keep up the good work and update soon! :D
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