Nothing is stronger than family!

i felt the cringe immediately after seeing that jutsu

This is the best fan fic i have ever saw i love it and made me cry fr thank you so much

I LOVED IT PLEASE MAKE MORE LIKE THIS

there is no emotion in this fic

This story is ass and reads like a really bad rough draft.

This reads like a really bad rough draft.

I love Madara Uchiha’s character (when not trying to rule the world) so when you recreated his fight scene I loved it! I think that is my favorite scene in canon.

This is so much bullshit, what they can't speak of the Kyuubi but they can organise hunts to torture him? Nobody does shit? They aren't able to catch a 4 year old child? A child is still a child, why wouldn't he lash back, kids are impulsive and emotionally charged, since when would a child let himself be beaten to appease people? Even Itachi the super prodigy understood this thought and did it only in his early teens.

See you did it again. You go from calling him Konoha's Red Devil one minute to Konoha's Red Fang the next. You have a small continuity error there.

In the Bingo Book you have him labeled as Konoha's Red Fang, not Red Devil. Honestly the Red Fang sounds cooler.

Overall a good story but the continuity errors stacked a bit. Itachi is said to sterile in an earlier chapter then to say later he gets with Ayame and has a son? There's a few of those sprinkled through the story but still a good read. Thanks for posting.

My mans said a 2.5 year time skip whilst doing a 5.5 year timeskip with not showing anything in between idiot.

LMFAOOOOOOOO so the kid is 2 years old already? That means that my mans fucked and had children at the age of 14

LMFAOOO, yeah you definitely fucked the fanfic up and how of a stupid decision was that?
Geez, my mans didn't even show shit and instantly makes him have children while being 15 almost 16... ffs
Lack of decent writing much?