Please update again soon. Thanks.

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Will naruto and itachi have their eyes switched since both possess mangekyo now to gain the eternal so they don't go blind

So now Naruto and Itachi will swap eyes and Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan...!

Great chapter! I like this story doing a good job man

Damn naruto is really smart. When will romance come?

naruto is a child. he should not be having the authority of pushing out elders like that no matter how powerful he has become. For a child, he is allowed WAY too much inside information and the fact that such a poor excuse of itachi giving up on his full brother is another bad sign and poor favoritism. i also see some bashing on sasuke and the clan. you can hate the boy all you like, but bashing in my eyes is not the way to do things. I couldn't take reading fully anymore once also realized you made kurama a girl, so I skimmed. And to make a child, only 8 years old help massacre a clan is over the top, and the makings of a gary stu...in canon...that doesn't sound right. Thus, I know how this story is going to go, so sorry, i think i'm done here. good luck with your future endeavors

Another great chapter and a much better solution to the Uchiha massacre than in canon. Keep up the good work.

Interesting direction, now Danzo wont have access to the Sharingan for his arm... Awesome chapter and story, I love it and cant wait for the next update.

wow now that is a good massacre scene

nice twists in this chapter...i loved how u changed the uchiha massacre...hats off on this

DAMN that is a good cover but whats going to happen to danzo

Great chapter!

I'm a big believer in constructive critisim, so I'm going to be very specific, here.

You do a pretty good job with spelling, but your spellchecking program won't notice when you mispell with another actual word. During Minato's final line, for example, 'Protect my son, for he is destined for greatness or greatness will be trust upon him', it's clearly obvious that the word trust should have been thrust. Always remember to review your work, even after spelling-checking. Punctation is decent, but there are quite a few missing comma's.
Your biggest problem in writing terms is your improper use of past/and or present tense. "If the past 5 years could be described in the word by either Naruto or the Sandiame Hokage then that word would be hell." Would be hell, for example should have been written, Would have been hell.

As for the content of the story, I have some major bones to pick with you.
The idea that Saratobi, the venerated 'God of Shinobi' could be reduced to a figurehead is highly unlikely, but not inpossible. The idea that it could be done by the civilion council is simply laughable.
Naruto in his opening scenes is unblievable; five year-olds don't speak that way. The simple one-line explanation of "Well, he's just really smart", is embarrassingly lazy writing. That simple paragraph, indeed, the entire time skip, could have been proply transformed into a chapter of your story. Instead, we get a paper-thin explanation for a character who behaves very strangely (for his age).
The yearly mobs in your story were offensive to anyone with a decent undersztanding of how a shinobi village works. Mobs forming with the idea of teaching a troublemaker a lesson are one thing, but such gatherings would be watched, and the split-second that such a gathering turns violent, you'd better believe that every single one of those people would end up, at the very least, in a cell awaiting the tender mercies of Ibiki. To say nothing of what Danzo would do, especially a Danzo in some strange world where Saratobi has been striped of the power needed to keep Danzo under contol.

I stoped reading about halfway through the first chapter. Hopefully, you will decide to re-write your story in a more-believable way, at which time, I'd be willing to give it another go.

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