keep going, this is great and funny...I feel sorry for Naruto

this is a good story, I cant wait to see what will happen next

love it

Quite a few cliches in here, actually nothing but cliches. Is this fic just to have a sharingan/genjutsu naruto/kurenai fic? If so then it's kind of not worth it, the ship is good, but shingan genjutsu are too limited and suck ass, a good genjutsu user has real skill.

The story really has a good flow do it even if it going bit fast. It was easy to read which is a great thing and it really fit together well. I really like how Kyuubi and Naruto talked to each other like you had done.

I can't wait to see Kurenai ending up with him and just how you are going to have the two of them getting together. So with all that said I hope you update soon because I really enjoy this story and can't wait to see more.

Please countinue really good

good story so far keep up the good work

I'm left speechless how you managed to make this story so outdated and incorrect considering how modern the story is

I like your idea for the story. It's magnificent

Nice story, but just to point it out to you that allot is not a word that is used in the context you used, it is two words "a lot" that you most likely meant, other than that nice job.

Hmm, it seemed really rushed and highly cliched, but I liked the way you made him get the Sharingan. Good work indeed. And it seems you changed history quite a bit. Let's see if you can make it better than it its. I hope so because you seem to have a good idea going, just poor execution.

continue the story

Sweet first chapter