No fucking way that this is a naruto x yugito...
Ffs

The sharingan is eagle vision from assassins creed

next

OK, I guess you changed Kurama's name to Hikari.

This story is Amazing so far. I wish the story was longer though the ideas in it are amazing and the chapters are long them selves but im saddened that its only 97k words and am dreading when I finish this story its truely amazing!

Awesome story. Thanks for writing this

Well, I definitely wasn't expecting that ending! Quite bittersweet, but at least Naruto can spend time with his daughters.

Falling pregnant? You make pregnancy sound like it's a disease! I think that's strange, seeing as how most of the time it's something that a couple looks forward to.

while this story is has many likes and favs it doesn't come close to showing it. honestly it's about average to the 300 400 favorite range. for one its way to fast paced to the point most dialogue feels like it was scraped. second of all characters are basically robots with the same generic response to everything. third naruto is like a all powerful being that no one would dare cross and or question. like do you really think he could scare or intimated the third even slightly. fourth why is naruto allowed to do what he does with out consequence. sure he holds a lot of the cards but at the end of the day he is a soldier in a military ruled village. he would be pt in his place for the shit he pulls but everyone is afraid of him fuck logic. lastly before someone says its fanfiction i know i don't mind ocness as long as it makes sense. in this story there is only 2 characters naruto and every one that isn't naruto with minor tweaks.

ps. the manga was basically over when this was posted. so why is the background lore so screwed that it's basically a theory video from 2011-12

This story is great and written well although a little compressed but still a good story and I recommend reading it.

i think he cant will blind because he has kybi and (half uzumaki) because all nutrition from his mother,,

While I don't like how you've portrayed Hiruzen and Tsunade I do like how the battle was described.

Pretty good

You have done well in writing this part

Pretty badass battle