Intresting stuff

Poor Zabuza and Haku. Great stuff though.

Love your version of Naruto.

Excellent stuff

Glad Itachi has been saved from the wrong path.

I love this completely.

This is fantastic stuff.

I’ve seen this story for awhile but kept putting it off since I never got past the second chapter. It was far to...hmm fast paced? It’s hard to explain. Anyways I decided to try again and just push through and honestly the story has great potential but story moves to fast, it feels like sections of the story and dialogue was just removed. If you can look past that the story is good. I did finish it, it did frustrate me at times but I did enjoy it as well. I wish you the best.

One missing? ONE MISSING?! IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN HALF!

I love just the pure Acceptance

So Itachi was not really sterile

Why would they give him a genin team before sending him on missions to first test how he does leading a team? Strength and power are great and all but isn't experience more important to train a genin team?

I thought you said Danzo abandoned the leaf after the massacre? Also you mentioned earlier that Asuma and Kurenai went out a few times but it didn't work out.

I would think it would take more than just word of mouth by one person to get someone into the bingo book with multiple bounties. That didn't make much sense to me. Sasuke and Sakura didn't think it was strange that the dead last was suddenly so skilled from their point of view?

I am surprised that Mikoto doesn't try to make her 5 year old son stop cursing