That was genius usage of izanami dude! Splendid story ! Hope to see more of your work.

Love the story, a shame that you never finished it.

I love this story. Kudos to you!

I like this story.

This is so awesome and young Naruto is acting so cute and lovable. I love the way you have written this and the best part is it is only chapter one, ya me!

An OP Naruto becomes a boring character.

10/10 and I ain't gonna lie I was in tears on chapter 18 so 10/10

So first you told us that Naruto is smart and ten seconds later he acts like a complete retard by letting civilians almost beating him to death ? Are you sure that you know what smart means ?

even though the writing style is normally not my taste, i FUCKING love this story. believable Back round, nice training(i love training scenes just not to over done, unless there's a reason) a little above average middle(basically the story from academy days to he comes back from his training trip) it had so much potential to become so much more low(for some reason i can't remember how to spell that) more detail, more more emotions, (like explain why i loves or hates someone explain there quirks there faults, like how his brother is to loyal, how his mother chews her hair when she is upset, i don't know, you get what i mean?). and i just love his nindo way, most fanfics of naruto are kind of predictable, i'm not complaining about most are still good reads if you can get over the same entry to the story, it most of the time get's original about 1/4 in. anyhow the ending a got to admit, even tho i don't to(sits in the corner pouting) the end was kind of feels rushed like you didn't give tobi or madara the real credit they deserve, if that makes any cens(can't spell that either, don't know why i'm probs dumb) but for i don't my but i just can't stop reading this, i have read this about 6 time now and i still keep finding it intresting( that spelt wrong) this is in my top 5 favourite reads books and fanfiction. P.S i think you should work on your fighting scenes tho, there great but my gut tells me they could be FANTASIC.

Great

This story is so great, ending is sad tho

Wasn't Danzo declared a nuke-nin and criminal
how could he be in the council then?

i like the idea of this story. but not the character traits that I'm seeing. you have made a way too impossibly goody too shoes character. the idea that a person can be so righteously good in the way you have painted naruto here is inhuman. i see the way naruto reacts to the negative stuff you have put him though. and i can not see him as a human. he is more of a robot only programed to love and accept. humans are human because we are emotional and flawed. we feel pain, we get sad. we rage against those that hurt us. and we are selfish for our own happiness. sure there is for sure compassion and empathy in spades for any good character. but not in a way that completely negates the emotional backlash that would make a hated and beaten child willing to die for the people that hurt him for no reason. its inhuman

me

Que buena que estuvo tu historia gracias sos un genio