Reviews for The Hidden Uchiha
Fanfiction4thewin-Blog chapter 2 . 5/27/2016
Great story line just not very good characters.
Sorry if it sounds mean.
No child acts like that even ones that are geniuses.
He is way to powerful you are OP'ing your character, it's not lifelike, he is not a human child basically his speech is way to perfect for a child. It is really off putting. Make sure he has flaws. Make him human and not a robot.
za worlda chapter 9 . 5/14/2016
its totally madara vs allied shinobi forces
Wade98 chapter 8 . 4/24/2016
is it just me or has naruto fallen prey to the uchiha curse? I remember you saying that when their friends /family are in danger, they will seek power to protect them. but in the process, they will become power hungry. am I right or am I stupid?
Chrisfragger chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
Well... This is a lot of b.s... Too much for me to swallow thanks.
ImAEliteReader chapter 3 . 3/15/2016
god damnit anthor priase the log joke i swear have people even read the holy bible of the log?
Guest chapter 19 . 1/29/2016
Guest chapter 14 . 1/23/2016
Too much sasuke bashing
haguduhaku chapter 2 . 1/19/2016
the summary said 5 year old smart kid. are you freaking kidding me? he might as well be a man in a childs body. the average 5 year old child is counting the circles in each number while this naruto already figured out his relation to his father at the age of 3
kiado chapter 1 . 12/30/2015 wrong with with.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/7/2015
Good story although I hardly read it since Kurenai mission revealed. I felt disappointed a little because I really wanted to see at least once Naruto tried to kill Kurenai when she want ask him to forgive her cause it can make your story more interesting. Honestly I said this is first time I read story which Kurenai being a bitch a little. ( I skip from chapter 12-14 ) But this story ruined when you decided to kill Yugito. (In my opinion) Then you make him can't revive her. Btw still good story.
Xxx chapter 5 . 11/8/2015
Felt like this had potential to be a really good story, but its kind of ruined with alot of things...
Toto11261 chapter 3 . 11/8/2015
Did you make kurenai younger? Otherwise i makes no sense... She is the same age as kakashi (around 20) though it is a good story so keep it up
Crusade chapter 2 . 11/7/2015
You know, its not possible to have 2 tomoe sharingan and ms? Doesnt make any sense either... Ms comes after 3 tomoe sharingan...
Guest chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
Wait...does Sasuke not exist?
MECHANICALCHEESE chapter 2 . 9/30/2015
I know that your Naruto is supposed to be a genius and all, but he already behaves like a teenager. He hasn't even gone through puberty and he understands sex and how it's a social no-no to walk around in boxers.

Even Kakashi was a little immature when he was young. I just don't want your Naruto to be a static character; in other words, you're giving him too much too fast. He needs progressive character development. He needs to grow up; how can he do that when he already is?
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