|Reviews for Twin of the BWL|
| doubledamn chapter 4 . 7/8
This is going to be /fun/ isn't it?
| doubledamn chapter 3 . 7/8
I have yet to see a better reference to Mystery Men in all of Fanficland.
| doubledamn chapter 2 . 7/8
So Merlin is alive and runs the Obscure Licencing Office? Makes sense.
| mamabear888 chapter 4 . 1/28
Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter
| KrisB-71854 chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
I generally liked everything in this one. I can't believe that I hadn't gotten to this one yet. You've got too many great fics that I'd just want a few more thousand words added into.
What's great about all this is that I can't really tell just how much Harry actually knows and is actually just making up. That's grand.
One thing that you didn't really note or comment on is how much of that "dark" ministry magic did Harry either know, learn, or bring with him? Normally, carrying things from one life to the next would be a huge no no. I could see having a magical storage space tied directly to his soul though basically giving him access to all that stuff.
I'd love to see you run with this. With Ginny and Luna together with Harry that sort of cuts out the second year diary plot using her. I like the Harry/Luna right off thing. Ginny just being a friend and willing to play along works as well.
I would love a comment from Tom about how his is so glad that he didn't mark the crazy quiet one.
Some fun ideas is for karmic runes on the DA exit at the LC. Some thing like that would basically curse/bless most wizards rather easily.
I'd like to see him experiment with something like that in the mundane world just to see how things turn out. Maybe ward a football stadium or something and sit back and watch.
This one does have a few plot holes about how James is alive, but I'm fine with that. I'll ignore it. I would just love reading more.
I'd love to see the headmaster's reaction to Harry's piece of paper getting him out of any and all plots for the greater good. I'd love to see Snape through a hissy fit that he didn't think of something like that.
I can't wait to see what fun mind arts skills you'd toss in there. I'm sure that Harry wouldn't want his, Luna's or their friends minds read or tampered with. Surely there is something that could be placed to guard children from any adults not their parents or such.
I'd love to see Molly's reaction to Ginny going as well as their report cards and all that. I'm not one for bashing, but without Harry around, I doubt that Ron would be friends with Hermione. That means that his grades will likely be much lower than Ginny's. That'll be something to be teased over from the twins and yelled at from his mum.
Molly will have to be mixed over it all. It'll get all her kids out of the house, but she wasn't ready for that! She will also be mixed on Ginny being so excited and pleased about being in and doing well in Hogwarts.
The only one who would be really irked would be Harry's younger sister. I could see her being irked that he helped Ginny sneak into school, but not her.
There is just so much raw potential with this!
| NarutosBrat chapter 4 . 12/5/2014
Why do I get the feeling that the half-blood vigor Narcissa is really thinking about involves a naked, sweaty, thoroughly satisfied witch with her back blown completely out?
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| reader1writer1 chapter 4 . 10/14/2014
LOL Masterful! Great read so far
| reader1writer1 chapter 3 . 10/14/2014
This is a riot! :) I love it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
a) Where's the twin? I guess I shall read on to see if you do something next chapter.
b) I see a lot of the usual dross, still. Maybe that goes once the twin pops up?
| red-jacobson chapter 4 . 9/16/2014
I can't believe I hadn't read this one before!
| kitsuneko1976 chapter 4 . 7/16/2014
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. a cameo from mystery men. cool touch!
| Sugar0o chapter 4 . 6/15/2014
i really need you to add to this, you;ve had me cracking up for 4 chapters!
| KoreanMusicFan chapter 3 . 5/23/2014
this story is making my head hurt. so this is where i leave this story and find another.
But great idea to subjects dumbledork to live harrys life.
| KoreanMusicFan chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
what the hell?