Reviews for Inseparable |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() A truly beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say a very original approach to a back in time fix it. Quite fun to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() You couldnt even finish it? the last chap. is just Harry's vows. what a fucking copout |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know at this point considering how old this story is, it's kind of pointless but Susan isn't an orphan. She lives with her parents not Amelia Bones who was noted to live alone when she was murdered by Voldemort personally. Seriously. If Susan was her ward, then she would've been murdered alongside her aunt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...so sappy it's sweet. But I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() disgusting, having 11 year olds doing that, you just lost a reader |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad Harry and Hermione retained their memories, even if they didn’t get to be just kids again. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rgarding your comments: I prefer to not associate a person from a story with an actor. I consider that a bit limiting, especially for those that get a strong description in the book. Thank you for the story |
![]() ![]() Sad for Hannah who misses out on her best friend Susan. |
![]() ![]() I'm very partial to Pandora for Luna's mom and I'm not sure why. Selene would be my second choice though. |
![]() ![]() Why throw the stone through the Veil? Massive waste. Only needed to deal with the ring not the stone faceted into it. |
![]() ![]() I'd say there is something they forgot. The Longbottoms. And also Lunas mom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() legal age for marriage in England is 16 (with parental consent). In HP magicals are adults at 17 |
![]() ![]() Ok story, after seeing how much Dramoine you've written it makes sense how flat this felt. The time travel aspect was very unique though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was great! Thanks for sharing it! |