Reviews for Inseparable
Guest chapter 5 . 1/31/2019
I feel so bad for Alan Turing and all those who suffered for no good reason and all because of other's bigotry. Nasty business. Love is love; leave them be.

On another note, I don't actually like the idea of torturing Albus insane with his DEAD SISTER. That's not really cool, yo.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/14/2019
Great going. A Grey Harry & Hermione vs. semi-evil AD.
EdTheBeast chapter 9 . 1/14/2019
Everyone should read the wedding vows! This is a great, sad, & happy chapter!
EdTheBeast chapter 8 . 1/14/2019
OK. Very good chapter!
EdTheBeast chapter 7 . 1/14/2019
Very canon in a fake way. Love it!
EdTheBeast chapter 6 . 1/14/2019
Cute!
EdTheBeast chapter 5 . 1/14/2019
Interesting. The spot for some reason had me logged out. So last guest, last chapter, was me.
EdTheBeast chapter 3 . 1/14/2019
AD Turning evil?
EdTheBeast chapter 2 . 1/14/2019
Excellent AD bashing.
EdTheBeast chapter 1 . 1/14/2019
Excellent start. Beautifully done.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/25/2018
Great story. The only two questions I'm left with are... What happen the umbridge in this new timeline. And did they get the Merlin key again. I wouldn't want to leave that sitting around. Also there wasn't much mentioned about video games, computers and cell phones being used by magical's. A cell phone is better than floo. You don't have to be at your house or on the floor hovering over the fire to talk. But you can use it everywhere. I'm sure that along with games and Disney movies would be something the kids would love. It would change the magical worked a lot. We didn't see or hear much about that at all.
Padfoot'smyMan chapter 2 . 12/11/2018
I hope that frying pan was cast iron.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/11/2018
I get that it's supposed to be funny how H-n-H an' gang drive Albus batty (battier than usual) and all, just, I don't think insanity is a valid comedic plot point. It seems too mean, too cruel. I'd by far rather see them take Albus down with a straight-up forward offensive rather than lurking around behind the scenes poking at his sorest points. Going the "make him insane" route is just cheap, lazy, and beneath the "good" guys.
FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 9 . 10/8/2018
Harry and Hermione have over 10,000 realities on
FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 8 . 10/7/2018
Lemon drops are too damn sour. I prefer liquorice. Good and Plenty Zero candy bars over Snickers anyday.
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