Reviews for Inseparable |
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![]() ![]() That is how the series should have ended |
![]() ![]() Pranking Old Dumbass should be fun to watch |
![]() ![]() A pair of toddlers with teenage memories just saw the greatest wizard slap down by a Muggle with a frying pan. God I got to laugh at that |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was a joy to read. the characters independance, love and resourcefulness. Hermione, the Potters, the Grangers, I was left with the wonder, of what would have been the outcome on Dumbledore finding the fake Horcruxes?. I don't mind not having complete smut scenes... really they might be adults on their heads, but had apperances of teens and the image to me is incomplete. However, Luna Neville and Susan had little interaction. Congrats on having Mrs. Granger bash Dumbles with a frying pan. Thank you for sharing a bit of your vision. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kool story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I believe you have the most original plots in Harry Potter fandom. You have a unique way of looking at the characters that gives the stories a twist that I've never thought of. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful! I have read lots and lots of time travel stories but none don't from this view point! I loved the plot and the way each character was written! Great job xx |
![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() and then that happened. ouch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok... why does dumbledore trust snape? i thought it was because voldy killed lily, which didnt happen in this timeline. you're mixing up cause and effect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The opinions of Severus in this story. Are they part of the plot or are they your own assessments? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() "Thank Merlin" lol nice double meaning |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved it...Although I am a dramione shipper...I looooveed it...first time saw harry hermione as not siblings but as a couple...Thanks dude! |