Reviews for Inseparable |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() Imagining a man holding a shotgun in Dumbledore's face while he looks down the barrel in shock will never not bring a smile to my face. |
![]() ![]() ![]() umm.. just that... what happened to ginny? she's the only one from the weasleys whom we don't know what happened to her |
![]() ![]() This is disturbing man. What's WRONG with you? You are writing about two hypothetical children reminiscing about their "previous" live's sexual exploits. And you're doing it blatantly. The type of mind that can do that in whatever made up scenario should not EVER be around children. That's just creepy. Like...you are SICK to just comfortably write that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this could be a fantastic story, but the sex talkeven just talk of desire- between Harry and Hermione in children's bodies is so gross. |
![]() ![]() Very good. I see similarities to other good stories. Which is not bad, but almost impossible to avoid with so many fics out there. Time travel where both come back has been. A DIFFERENT HALLOWEEN is similar in some ways. The Weasleys having to leave Britain has been done, though they went to Egypt and Ron instead of being killed had been castrated and was a Ronnie "girl". Dumbledore driven insane by potions is new I think... Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed it. Though Ron dying was a pretty heavy plot twist. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jeeze, what’d Charlie and Bill do to deserve that? The books are quite explicit that Bill is cool :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() “ "Why? There's nothing wrong with being gay." “ Who said this? It’s not clear. I also don’t understand WHY they said it. Everyone knows why a gay couple would hide. Shit, closeted gay was still the standard in the 90s! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Weasleys are going to go SPLAT, just like Dumbledore's reputation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You will get Potter and Longbottom Dumb Butt, but they will be prepared for your manipulations! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your plans are falling apart Dumbledore! Your "For the Greater Good" is being shredded. You won't have a leg to stand on soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like a good deal about this story, but I feel like I'd like a version without any allusions to adult activities more. Such a weird issue that run into with time traveling couples. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish there's more screens of little Harry and Hermione. They're so cute. There're some plots when you deal with Dumble, how to apparate in and out Hogwarts without triggering the wards, and the headmaster's office! But it's a short story so it's ok! |
![]() ![]() why not ravenclaw harry and hermione are very knowledgebale i do have a theory them being soul mates and soul bonds would be able to share knwledge powers and abilities right so |