Reviews for Inseparable
Commando678 chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
I think it would be a better story if they didnt remember bit hey youre the author and got my follow
Olaf74 chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
I think dear old old dumb-as-a-duck will have an stroke at this rate :)
BMS chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
Nice little story. Keep it up.
angel897 chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
loved it
Frustr8dwriter chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
I like where this is going so far! I'm glad to see the adults accepting what Harry & Hermione have said and done, and are making plans to do what it takes to protect their children. I have to assume that even though Augusta is angry, that the rest of the Longbottoms are okay? In any event, this is a wonderful story - can't wait to read what happens next!
robert32514 chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
Will there be any more chapters?
Dragonsblood62463 chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
I'm starting to really like this one hope to see more soon
SuperSonicSara chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Once again you start a story I don't want to stop reading! I like where this seems to be headed :) can't wait for more!
Penny is wise chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
Awesome chapter. I've always loved these kinds of stories too bad there's not many of them. One they have really slow updates if they continue it and the other while fun to read because Harry had a massive harem was very very long.
pottersparky chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
I love your story. It really fun to read. It just hermonie is post to be one like harry not 2 years old. You such think of fixing that. They are same age how could not be if start hogwarts at same time. I like see changes that potters and sirius black make with tom riddle jr dead along with his band of men being put to jail or better yet put to death. Maybe draco could be different without his father around and sirius see that future is good one. There be be place to help magic children who are being hurt like harry was. There so much that could be done for better world in land of magic. Like making sure that underlady never goes near childern knowing what she is. Oh what fun it be see what you do. Please update soon. Do not end story to soon please.
Vegasman59 chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
This is very good, I'm enjoying it and can't wait for more!
mithrilandtj chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
The "GREAT WIZARD" felled to a muggle-wielded frying pan. LOL!
Penghost chapter 2 . 12/18/2013
A bit strange but very good idea.
I love the part with the frying pan! :-)
I wonder what you have up your sleeve.
The start is very intriguing!
Thanks for your time.
AllWasWell07 chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
Oh this is cute. I like it.
PairingMatters chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
Good story so far
Why don't you have Harry to be fully trained with Occlumancy skills so that Dumbledore won't be able to read Harry's mind if they get a chance to see each other face to face?
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