Reviews for Inseparable |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() VERY CUTE STORY... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far! I can't wait to see where you take this. Please, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice story looking forward to were this goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I hope this wasn't a one-shot...need to know wha happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it bad I almost started to cry at the end lol XD can't wait for more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way this starts, but knowing Dumbledore he will find a way to control them. But they forgot about Neville and his parent Maybe they left some information to stop them being attacked Until next time Gloria |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this sounds really promising! I love it so far. |
![]() ![]() Oh, excellent start to your incredible story! I just wonder how Lily and James are going to deal with Dumbledore and his "Greater Good". I can just imagine him telling them that Voldemort will be back. Hopefully they will just break the prophecy over his head. Wonderful story! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this a lot. Just want to know where it goes from here |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damned if you haven't got me hooked - even with the one-shot Voldie takedown... I hope to read more of this excellent tale in the near future and can hardly wait to see what you've got planned next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent start! I hope Harry is smart in this one. Thick, oblivious Harry aggravates me. It looks like you have him as at least observant and emotionally aware. That's good. Can't wait for the update! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Conclusion? Got anything more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why am I getting the feeling that these two will be worse than the Marauders and Weasley Twins combined? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read similar stories in that both Harry and Hermione return to fix their past, but not where they've approached their parents with the truth. Most times, these stories start with their first meeting on the train to Hogwarts. Anyway, great start and I look forward to reading about what happens next. I imagine Dumbles will be quite put out when he learns that things didn't go precisely as he planned. Even though Voldie is well and truly dead, Dumbles didn't get to claim any of the glory. Wonder how he'll react to that little disappointment? |