Reviews for Inseparable |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well.. not having sex for 10 years is going to be rough, ngl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot Tamale: "Hate it when Hermione whacks/punches/assaults Harry. It's not cute, funny, or acceptable. What would happen if it were Harry whacking Hermione?" I agree. This seems to be a fluffy H&H story, but there are several stories on ff net in which Hermione slaps Harry's face simply out of pique, and I always pull for Harry to slap her right back. It rarely happens, but it is satisfying and well-deserved when it does. The same is true for the general punching and head-slapping in which she frequently engages. It is inappropriate, and it is not funny. I have a feeling Hermione will only see more of it with Lily. She is lucky Harry is a gentleman. |
![]() ![]() Another ingenious and enjoyable story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's chemical castration? |
![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this time travel story! Very different from anything I've ever read. It was nice getting to "know" James and Lily. That was a lot of work to set up the fake horcruxes and then not use them! All in all a great story though I was saddened at the Weasleys part played in it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As time-travel fics go, this was a pretty good one. Lots of logic involved, which I appreciate. Good plotting and characterization. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was nice. Could do with even less details of their desire to be intimate in such young bodies. But still enjoyable as far as the story goes. At first I thought you were gonna make it a olderHarry and Hermione raise a younger Harry thing but this idea was fun too. I also find it hilarious that George and Fred would be adopted into having separate last names from each other by a pair of friends that are practically family who so happened to be their inspiration. And Dumbledore being unaware of his downfall being the manipulations of someone else was a nice touch. Lots of fics have a tendency to have Harry or whoever brag while they're doing it or after the fact or they have Dumbledore so unreasonably suspicious that he figures out who is responsible for the tiniest or wrong reasons/jumping to conclusions that just happened to be somewhat correct. Good job on having them improve the magical world too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Weasleys were pretty darn awful in their past future. I'm anxious to see how they punish them for it, even more so than Dumbledore. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am boo-hooing my head off right now, which autocorrect hysterically changed to hip hopping, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome plot bunny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree, he should get his dues too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how they are making muggle items work for magicals. Hot tubs! |