| Reviews for Inseparable |
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   aamlkb chapter 3 . 7/25/2020 I love how they are making muggle items work for magicals. Hot tubs! |
| aamlkb chapter 1 . 7/25/2020 Thank goodness! I have read this before but forgot to save it. I have been looking all over for this fic to read again. I thought you took it off the website but I’m just really stupid for not saving it to my favorites. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/22/2020 I'm not comfortable with using the death of a beloved sister to manipulate Albus' mental state. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/22/2020 Um, who cares about sex between 11 and 12 year old kids? Pedophiles, that's who. Pedophiles. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/22/2020 This chapter feels much more like a story outline, or a description of a story, than a real chapter IN a story. I mean, it's good and it's nicely written and all, but yeah, it just feel like "a description of" rather than "a chapter in". |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/20/2020 Beautiful! Extremely beautiful! |
| nicolajaneharcourt chapter 5 . 6/18/2020 I imagine this message is very late to the party, as your story was complete in 2014, but homosexuality was decriminalised in the UK in1967. |
| foxylittlelady chapter 9 . 6/13/2020 Quick and too the point. Thumbs up! |
| Lerris chapter 9 . 6/3/2020 This is basically fair overall.. |
| stevem1 chapter 9 . 6/2/2020 A very cute time travel story. It lacks tension but it’s sometimes nice reading things that go to good guys way. |
| scyfly chapter 3 . 5/27/2020 getting in the vault took about as long as they thought... summoning he locket, cause kreacher will ofc let it go... you are seriously lacking in any details and what you do give out is bs. you do ofc spent half a chapter writing 2 letters from the future wih a love filled soppy story, ofc even in here are all the 'wrong' details |
| ManoKitty chapter 9 . 5/24/2020 loved it! your fanfictions are really nice, and I love to read them . |
| nightwing27 chapter 7 . 5/2/2020 good thing in my story all his dirty plans will known against the potters and all the bribes he been doing to do illegal laws and the potters will revel their will before anything happens to them |
| Kai chapter 4 . 4/18/2020 You said that the Granger parents see Harry as their son and the Potters Hermione as their daughter. That would make Harry and Hermione siblings. Of course I could make some stupid inbreeding jokes now, which wouldn't be nearly as funny as they could be if inbreeding weren't a common occurrence in magical Britain (can you say "Walburga Black, née Black" without a shudder?). But: The couple retained their memories. Otherwise the probability would be quite high that they would indeed view each other as siblings. Edvard Westermarck says so. |
| wpl chapter 9 . 4/10/2020 great story sort of wished it was longer, but very great one never the less keep writing. |