Reviews for The Second Time Around |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so sad seeing it's been so long since the last chapter was posted, I really enjoyed the story, and I would love to read it to the end. If the end were to be posted in the future, that's it. I'll keep hope, but in the meantime, thank you for this amazing story. It was really a joy to discover it, sentence by sentence |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. I look forward to reading the rest of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok beta bitch pussy harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm it's a mystery why this has been abandoned for so long my only thought would be that something happened to you or you simply lost the will to continue writing which is ashame this could of been pretty good if it was allowed to flourish |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is pointless for a story this old but... Didn't you say harry fixed his eye sight somewhat? He shouldn't need glasses yet the last two chapters they've come back with a vengeance |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yea this is a much better chapter now that the story is on its feet so to speak. I'll keep reading and maybe find out why you've left it all these years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God's I hate when people make harry a metamorph, and a trolls skin is resistant to magic it's why people don't pick them up and carry them like you showed. It's ridiculously difficult for someone like Tom let along a time traveling person you say is weaker then Tom who's currently in a child's body... Other then that meh okay chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing. Are you still active? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far this story has been utterly boring he hasn't really done anything and the story reads as very rushed |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would think that Harry would be perfectly able to remove any spell done to his hair |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story. honestly lupin is one of the most useless secondary characters ever. he's so passive that all he did was teach harry the patronus, that's it - which flitwick could have done too. hope you can continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope you will continue this or make a new fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() felt like this was missing a chapter. because the way this started |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent writing. Love the story. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Harry is sooo Jealous. I hope he ends up with Tonks in the end though, lord knows it's better then Lupin. No offense to Remus, but his attitude didn't really endear himself to me after the 5th book and up. |