|Reviews for Over Easy|
| Blackthorn Ashe chapter 2 . 8/12
I was reading this and suddenly came to the realization that Ace must have looked ridiculous holding up the egg to the crew. I was laughing the whole way! Are we gonna see Eggbert hatch?
| StarliteOracle chapter 1 . 1/31
| Alexzandria747 chapter 2 . 7/19/2015
I am laughing so hard I couldn't read
...we need to talk ace.
RUN ace RUN for your ever so sexy ass is on the line
I can just see the crew thinking ace has finally gone off the deep end and thinking its a prank
I can also just hope that someone tries to touch it and Marco goes into full on mommy Marco I'm a bloody extremely dangerous mythological predator on their ass
I can't wait for their to be something else on this
| AyraTheAverage chapter 2 . 5/4/2015
I'm too lazy to send in 2 reviews so this is for the whole thing P
I loved the story, i'm one of those weirdos you find who love reading mpreg stories and this is one of the better ones i have found. I also read another one of your mpreg stories, Baby Steps i believe, (and for the record it was awesome) you seem to have a talent for these type of stories, describing it well and making it believable.
I do hope you will find the time to update this story, it is one of those ones you don't find often.
Good luck with future stories and endeavors and keep up the hard work.
~ Kind Regards - Ayra
| N Harmonic chapter 2 . 2/20/2015
Omg this is perfect! Please let it not be a prank? That'd be adorable!
| Sailor Marty Rae chapter 2 . 11/19/2014
Ah! I love this so much.
If you dont mind, is it okay if i use this concept and turn it into a one shot? I'll give you credit and everythinf, but if you want me to not to, ill leave it alone.
| Mad Y u e chapter 2 . 10/22/2014
Omg ahahahahaha an embarrased Marco is so damn cute ashjdkahsdakjdadh
And Ace xDDDahsahdas he's just being Ace (?)
I want to know wth is going to hatch from that Egg! -rolls-
Pls update! x3
Thank you for sharing
| JarOfIdeas chapter 2 . 10/12/2014
What an egg?! XD Ah please updAte!
| BrainDeadMaggot chapter 2 . 9/11/2014
I failed to mention this in the earlier review but thanks to Marco's morbid thoughts I remembered.., this is how the egg came to be:
Ace shot his load inside Marco, where it slowly began to harden, then 3 weeks later, it popped out as an egg.., the end
| BrainDeadMaggot chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
All I could think about was Nire-chan's Eggbert.., but please oh please let this not be a baby Dino.., I can only imagine Thatch's face.., oh wait.., I don't have to.., "WTF did you fuck?!" Ahhhh.., priceless.., I want 11 more.., if all it takes is Ace topping then spread them legs Marco! I'm wondering if keeping it warm makes it grew bigger and faster.., like if Ace were to encase the egg in his flames would quicken the growth process and encourage it to hatch sooner.., flaming steroids..,
| Imperial Mint chapter 2 . 5/12/2014
This is such a good story! I'm excited for any updates (no pressure though!) and thank you so much for writing!
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/9/2014
Oh please please please please keep going with this! Absolutey amazing ,the charactisations were spot on and I had a doopy-ass grin on my face the whole way throughXD Please update soon!
| Lush D Crush chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
| Vivianne95 chapter 2 . 5/5/2014
Marco's soooo jealous!
Update the soonest possible please!
| descriptionsalive21 chapter 2 . 4/5/2014
So cute! .