Reviews for The Heart of Erebor
Guest chapter 28 . 12/29/2024
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Guest chapter 2 . 8/19/2021
One of my all time favorites.. i hope i see a Update someday :)
glenwo2 chapter 65 . 9/20/2020
Too bad there's no sequel to this.

I would've loved to have read how they dealt with the situation involving Sauron.
Ange.Phoenix Blodeuwedd chapter 65 . 4/26/2020
3 Hello! I'm French and I love all your stories (even if I put very few reviews in English as it's not necessarily natural for me to write in English - I find it easier to translate -)! Therefore, I was wondering if it would be possible to get permission to translate your fanfictions... ((mentioning of course the fact that you're the real author and I'm just a modest translator)).
Thanks to you for your writings, I'm looking forward to your answer!
Martiny the one and only still chapter 65 . 2/5/2020
It may have taken me a concentrated three days to read this but I managed it. Early on when Kili was convinced they lived I was of two minds, because of the sheer length awaiting me, it could not merely be Kili either abdicating and living on, or ruling, but when he stormed Gundabad so early I was convinced that they would either not be there or that at least one would be dead. I was half-convinced it would be a story of him trailing after lead after lead.

You've created quite a beast of a fic, and done a good job of it! The first two and the latter half of act 5 are my favorites, I especially love the Poisoned Kili scenes, truely my biggest weakness. Somewhere in there, it was implied if not stated that Kili was the heart of Erebor and I loved it, as well as the true fate of the Arkenstone, somehow managed to bring me to tears. I only wish Bilbo was more than just here and there, for as glorious as the failed trap was.

Also, Dain wasn't used as a convenient bad guy which is pretty great, but you kept the mystery of if he *could* be going.

Congrats on finishing this!
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 65 . 10/5/2019
very beautiful story and I'm so glad that you finished it! I loved that you focused on the relationship between the Durin's and erased Tauriel while including Legolas and the twins :)
The GoldenGroups chapter 65 . 8/10/2019
well crap I've been absolutely unable to put this down for the past three days or so
I hope you're happy; no sleep for FOREVER
but it's MOST worth itthis is EASILY the best Tolkien Verse fanfic I've ever read because your writing and planning is simply superb. I hope you're doing something with this immense talent of yours for writing (by which I mean, breathing vibrant life into characters and plotlines) and having a great life because boy you've given me a TRIP of a past few days
Syblime chapter 65 . 7/22/2019
Wow, what an ending! I'm sorry I didn't read it at the time of posting, but I'm here now and it's been an epic journey. Thank you for writing this fic! :)
Syblime chapter 63 . 7/22/2019
Bilbo! Asking for a break for a bite to eat! I love it!
But poor Dis.
Syblime chapter 60 . 7/22/2019
Love Elladan and Elrohir! And Frerin left holding the stone is a lovely detail. :)
Syblime chapter 57 . 7/19/2019
Oh Kili, he may think he's no good at diplomacy, but he really is! :)
Syblime chapter 56 . 7/19/2019
Love this! :)
Syblime chapter 55 . 7/19/2019
Oh my word! Incredible chapter! :)
Syblime chapter 53 . 7/18/2019
Haha, way to go Dis! But what will she do next? :)
cmdavis1976 chapter 1 . 5/15/2019
I found this recently and have spent the last few days reading it. I loved it. You have crafted an amazing, well thought out, well written, emotional, heartbreaking story that ends with hope. I almost wanted to cry at times at what Kili, Fili and Thorin endure, and am saddened by the dark shadows of their past experiences they will always carry with them. But I also love their strength, resilience and how they see each other through in the end.
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