Reviews for The Snow Angel and Her Knight
apeljohn chapter 11 . 4/12/2016
Just wanted to say thanks for writing a fic where Cardin actually suffers plausible consequences for his actions. My annoyance at his unrestrained thuggishness - both in canon and in fanworks - has been steadily increasing since I got into this fandom, and Chapter 10 of your fic was *extremely* therapeutic for me.

The rest is pretty damn good too, hope you feel inspired to continue it at some point.
NAJ P. Jackson chapter 4 . 12/30/2015
Disappointing that you only swapped Pyrrha and Ruby as their partners but retained the other partners. You should have mix it up.
dracohalo117 chapter 11 . 11/3/2015
This was a great chapter, a shame this story is on a hiatus, I would love to see more of it. I hope your life gets back on track soon man.

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dracohalo117 chapter 10 . 11/3/2015
This chapter was very good, and the fluffy omake is now my new pillow...

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dracohalo117 chapter 9 . 11/3/2015
Excellent chapter, and the Omake was adorable

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dracohalo117 chapter 8 . 11/3/2015
Well, Cardinal is screwed...

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dracohalo117 chapter 7 . 11/3/2015
Wow, Cardin and his team are going to suffer painfully for this no doubt.

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dracohalo117 chapter 6 . 11/3/2015
I enjoyed this chapter, especially how you made it clear Yang was Vacuan, not 'asian' which is an issue with a lot of RWBY fanfics, as such, they toss the immersion out the window.

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dracohalo117 chapter 5 . 11/3/2015
I wonder how the class with Oobleck will progress...

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dracohalo117 chapter 4 . 11/3/2015
Great chapter

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dracohalo117 chapter 3 . 11/3/2015
I can see Weiss and the red and gold sisters not getting along at first.

Looking forward to more soon.

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dracohalo117 chapter 2 . 11/3/2015
This was an adorable chapter.

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dracohalo117 chapter 1 . 11/3/2015
This was a good first chapter, keep it coming.

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zachshadrack chapter 11 . 10/20/2015
I love this story not many have a romance between Jaune and Weiss and I love how it is going BRING MORE!
BankruptSamurai chapter 11 . 10/20/2015
Honestly? Awesome. That's what this story is. Things that are left alone in canon are fleshed out, characters change drastically but still more or less manage to stick to their canon selves somewhat and semblances are at the very least considered and sorted out semi-realistically. Beacon's a bit more realistic, Jaune is a bit more "fuck yeah, embrace the epic" and I can safely say I like the direction the Jaune/Weiss pairing is going.

Y'know, towards an actual pairing. White Knight really doesn't get enough love.

It's been over a year since an update, but I hope to see more updates from you. You've got a good story going here, man.
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