Oh, yes Smaug's transformation was very impressive, and very well descripted. I was surprised that Lily did not try to stop Smaug from hurting her brother! Was she under his influence the entire time, or was she too shocked to move?

How strange, I watched DoS again just yesterday! And thoroughly enjoyed it, of course :P

Once she gets her bearing on things Lily will chew out Sumg in her own fashion lol she not much of a yeller and full out anger fit but she'll sure let him have it the best qay she can haha and thats something I can't wait to see hehe

Well until next chapter!

Oh whoa...definitely quite a chapter! An incredible one, as always!

I finally got to see the movie! My anniversary was on the 9th, so I bought it for us to watch... My daughter got to watch it too, and funnily enough she loves Smaug as much as we do.

I hope Lily doesn't try to leave on her own... That would be bad.

please update soon! I lov eit so far!

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

Oh this was very interesting. I can't wait to see what ammo each of them use for their confrontation. Plus I did enjoy the transformation from man to dragon. It seemed very painful but happened in a way that seemed logical for such a fantasty-esque situation XD Keep up the fantastic work!

Heheh, okay. That was very cool. Very violent. Very Smaug. Such fire. Such death. Wow. I'm glad to see this is back. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Loved smaug's rage and destruction, it was very believable of his character. I'm almost dreading the confrontation between him and lily that's coming. It ain't gonna be pretty ;)

:O I kinda feel sorry for Gaellyn but at the same time don't. Can't wait for the talk in the next chapter sounds like it's going to be an interesting one. I like smaug's transformation you made it really believable which was nice for once a lot of people would just say he changed

Ah darling this was brilliant! Smaug's transformation was so perfect, and absolutely beautifully written! I could almost see it, almost feel it within myself! Gorgeous!
Ok, so, I know I've been hassling you for Smaug to get some revenge on lake town, and I'm totally glad that he did, but you destroyed me with the old man! i have such a soft spot for brave old men, I was very glad Smaug didn't kill him (or at least show us that he died, if he did). I think you did that really well, Smaug got a bit of his revenge, but Lily's not going to be totally destroyed by it (as she would have been if smaug had eaten her brothers I think) and I feel satisfied, and a tiny bit guilty. It's a good mix! I'm so keen for next chapter! I loved Lily influencing Smaug with her tears, that was so cute! Ahhhhh yay for the next chapter! xxx

Well worth the wait. And you did an excellent job of Smaug's transformation. I kinda wish he had totally finished off her brother but what he did get was pretty harsh so it works. I fear for the people of lake town now that angry Smaug is back. Can't wait for him and Lily to discuss things so update again soon!

It's always nice to see Smaug back among his gold :D It will be interesting to see if they can come to some sort of common ground on the violence Smaug bestowed upon the town :)

Lovely! Your transition was to Dragon was smooth and well worth the wait. Brilliant action description in this chapter. I especially loved the beginning scene with Smaug in the lake.
As always looking forward to the next beautiful chapter!

Oh my god an update! I am incredibly excited about this chapter! Smaug is so ruthless (who doesn't love that about him right?). I'm so excited to see where this goes next! Update soon!