Reviews for Panem's Darling
Radio Free Death chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
The main trouble here is Prim's abilities and characterization. So she's good with a sword, how? Who taught her how to use one? Not Katniss, who mentioned she barely taught her how to hunt. It's just that Prim's already had the deck stacked for her by being awesome, with her awesome training score, so a lot of tension is lost.

Her nickname is the Wave, but she's dressed in a jumpsuit signifying fire, and she also has 'normal Capitolite stylists' which pretty much mean Cinna clones.

Lastly, Prim is a psychopath. She smirks at the idea the Capitolites are cheering her on, she wants the deadliest knife in the Cornucopia,
ChocolatyMinds chapter 6 . 12/27/2013
thumbs up to brilliant peeta! god,why ian? why? god this kid really needs to buy a big can of patience! and maybe some self-control pills...goodness! run run run! hang on to something! dont just stay there!FLOODS ARE COMING! great chapter!
I want Starbucks chapter 6 . 12/27/2013
I'm reading the fault in our stars, so far it's amazing!
Mattea chapter 6 . 12/26/2013
I really love this! Please keep writing this!
loopid chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
This is great! Love it!
svp24151198 chapter 5 . 12/26/2013
Good job, I liked Prim's little monologue. It really captured her young-teenage naivety, despite the horrors of the Arena that were forcing her to be mature, like 'OMG, a boy put his arm on my shoulder, we're gonna get married!" It made me smile :)
ChocolatyMinds chapter 4 . 12/23/2013
god,Quinn's poem was beautiful did you write it yourself?
ChocolatyMinds chapter 2 . 12/23/2013
aww!it like Prim's heart is singing"you belong with me" by taylor swift :):):):)
svp24151198 chapter 3 . 12/22/2013
I like the direction you're taking the story in so far. I think your characterisation of Prim is perfect. Can't wait for Chapter Four, that cliffhanger killed me!
mia2000 chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
can't 4 more. Totally love the story. Will b waiting 4 the next chapter.
ChocolatyMinds chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
OMG THIS LOOKS SOOOOOO EXITING! are you going to continue it? i really hope you do!
dc0808 chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
I love the story so far,esp. the idea of the map, it will make the story so interesting esp. if there is a second one (I'm betting Ian or the careers have it). Also how old are the stylists? Is Ian Prim's district partner? And I hope you go back in show the reaping even if it's just a flash back, I would love to see everyones reaction to Prim being reaped.
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