Reviews for Si Vis Pacem, Para Bellum
crankypants16 chapter 22 . 1/28/2018
Wonderful story. Thank you
Guest chapter 2 . 1/24/2018
Why would Dumbledore "tolerate" Lucius Malfoy as a governor of Hogwarts?
The headmaster answers to the governors, not the other way 'round.
They were the ones who voted to have him removed in the second book, after all...

So making noise about Dumbledore allowing Lucius to stay as a governor or on the board of governors is quite pointless then. They'd be better off accusing Dumbledore for being the sole reason for it snowing in January!

The first chapter was pretty good, but this one's ... meh. I personally felt that there was far too much unnecessary detail put into clothes, shoes and their haircuts. I doubt I will ever remember any detail of their outfits a few chapters in, to really care about what was in their buttons of all things.
Also, I do not know what you intended for Draco, but I can't get the image of him in pigtails out of my head! The moment I read "two braids" ... All I could think of was pigtails.
Finally, I think the three of them are massive jerks. Playing practical jokes is one thing, and great for a laugh or two but causing explosions and damaging property is another. And such language! At that age too? *shakes head disapprovingly* I wouldn't mind it if they were older, like maybe 15, but 11 is too early!
G E Proctor chapter 22 . 1/21/2018
Such a wonderful story, thank you for the great work.
slucas123 chapter 22 . 1/2/2018
Thanks a bunch for writing this story. Really hope you'll post an epilogue eventually! Your world building is excellent and I'd say quite unique compared to most of the stories I have read. While I didn't expect Harry's fight with Voldemort to be quite so simple, I did enjoy the trials and tribulations during Harry's fifth year. Thanks again for a great story :)
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 22 . 12/14/2017
Brilliantly different amazing story!
OoOXylionOoO chapter 22 . 12/9/2017
Thanks for the wonderful work you put into writing this fanfiction.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 13 . 11/28/2017
Thanks for the chapter!
OoOXylionOoO chapter 8 . 11/28/2017
Thanks for the story so far. It was a great read.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 6 . 11/28/2017
THanks for the grreat chapter.
You said that the bulgarian team gave them Nimbus 1700's but in the first chapter Harry is using Nimbus 2000.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 4 . 11/27/2017
THanks for the chapter!
OoOXylionOoO chapter 3 . 11/27/2017
Thanks for the great chapters so far. It's quite easy and nice to read.
Guest chapter 22 . 11/25/2017
Plase contine fanfic
Roland's Blade chapter 7 . 11/26/2017
So is Harry immune to the Allure?
Roland's Blade chapter 3 . 11/26/2017
The Lord of Voldemort of Rivia chapter 14 . 11/21/2017
Its interesting how everyone is so pissed that Dumbledore does not respect Durmstrang traditions and rules but than in same chapter no one wants to respect Hogwarts' rules and traditions.
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