Harry's strength in the story is very inconsistent, in the early chapters he seems to be the most powerful between Viktor and Draco with a huge gap but then often the author makes it look like that the three are equals when it comes to strength. Make up your damn mind..

The pacing is slow but it seems like it's moving forward now..
The character are never fully used, sirius is undeveloped..Harry is the least likeable character, Narcissa is borderline abusive towards sirius..Also, giving black eyes to 11 years old is not comedy lol..

So far, harry's the least likeable character in this story..Idk how you managed to do that but yep, harry is frustating in this story..

I would've thought transfiguration would be easy to harry considering his dad was a prodigy in that subject..

I hope one day you can upload the epilogue

This is good, really good. The characters feel so real.

I know you’ve been working on the Sinistral Ward series since, but is there any chance you have the epilogue sitting on your hard drive somewhere waiting to be uploaded? I’ve enjoyed this story over the years but some closure would be amazing. Though, this is a satisfying ending nonetheless

I know real life gets in the way, but, I hope you will one day finish this story. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

I am enjoying the story. I know it was quite a while ago, but I am sorry for your loss.

Great history, this is the third time that I read this history, I hope that one day you could write the epilogue.

Amazing story with a beautiful ending

Absolutely loved it! Now just waiting for your return to upload the epilogue.

The story had so much promise the first 1-2 chapters. But than it just goes downhill, while for shadowing of the scar means nearly nothing, the romance is flat, and ending is rushed in comparison to the early chapters.
It reads like an example of a story that had so much going on and planed and ran out of gas after the 1/3 mark.

Thank you so much for writing this story. I truly enjoyed every aspect. Despite Harry being very powerful it wasn’t portrayed in a cliche unrealistic way and I am very appreciative of that. Reading the years the Blacks had at Durmstrang was truly a joy, the structuring of how the school works made it seem so much more realistic than just the extreme militaristic way it written sometimes. And the character, all the side characters came alive shining with their own personalities. I am also so glad there was no excessive Dumbledore bashing, there was just the perfect amount to show he is not the all knowing second coming of Merlin, but he also accepted his mistakes in the end and didn’t let his ego come in the way of doing what’s right. The family dynamic in this story was a literal gold star, I felt like I wanted to be a part of them too, to me it was what made this story the best. Once again, thank you for this. Your writing was truly enjoyable. I hope you’re doing well.

Good story

Good story! Love viking-like Durmstrang.