Reviews for Raise Your Weapon
froovygirl chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Oh, this is outstanding.

Not happy, you're right, but a divergent canon that makes sense in its misery. Ani and Padme are the ultimate star-crossed lovers, and this story takes that concept and stands it on his head because it makes so much sense.

Your dialogue is terrific. Just different enough that you can't predict what either will say, yet powerful in that it tells the story between the lines. The "... Make her beautiful and powerful and unafraid" paragraph just knocked me silly.

I really enjoyed this. Thanks for the awesome read!
kerapal bubbles chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Ahgf. Can you hear my heart cracking in half? I just. Ow. I need that. Oh Star Wars, you wonderful thing. Episode 7 had better be amazing otherwise someone's getting their arms torn off.
taramidala chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
This. Was. Excellent. I find these kind of AUs fascinating, and I love your writing style. Concise, but very evocative. I can't wait to see it continue.
mokonahapuuuuuu chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
ooh nice :) :D I hope to see more
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