Reviews for Clearing Mist
Iyawolfwhite chapter 64 . 10/18
Loved it!
CampPillow chapter 49 . 8/14
I wonder if there'll be a reunion of Team Ao and Genma, Kurenai, and Gai
CampPillow chapter 41 . 8/14
I love how each pair had a partner to blame for potentially triggering the trap XDD
CampPillow chapter 29 . 8/13
these gray cloaks sounds amazing! I wonder if anyone has made any fanart yet?
Guest chapter 55 . 8/2
I feel like you nerfed Kisame a bit in the fanfic I mean the dude is capable of creating a bubble of water as big as an entire forest with a 30% chakra clone and forcing Gai to open the 7th gate to take him down. Kisame in this fic rarely uses his signature shark bomb jutsu and feels much weaker than his canon version.
Guest chapter 52 . 8/2
Isn't Isobu in a pocket dimension that only he can access? I don't think even obito with his kamui can get in since its a separate dimension from the kamui realm so obito can't teleport in
Guest chapter 48 . 8/2
Why doesn't Itachi use his Susanoo more? With the hax that is the yata mirror and totsuka blade he could one shot most akatsuki members if he used it more often.
Yurei Kyosuke chapter 55 . 7/5
why would the anbu capture them if the leader themselves are waiting for them? that kind of weird
Yurei Kyosuke chapter 43 . 7/4
also calling them by musuko or musume can be taken as kind of an insult, it's like you're putting them below you as the parents.
if you watch anime you would find an arrogant character or the villain calling others by "musumeonna" or "kozo" as insults to show their superiority. it's a bit similar to that, so if you call your child by this, it picture you as a kind of arrogant person.

kisame would do it though, probably, by his nature
Yurei Kyosuke chapter 43 . 7/4
calling your son by "musuko" is weird, it means you're not close to him because usually parents would call their children by name or nickname to be more... intimate(?), while the Children call them "kaa-san" or "tou-san" out of respect.

I can understand itachi calling Sasuke by otouto because he has grown distance from Sasuke ever since the massacre, while Sasuke called itachi by name because of hatred.
Yurei Kyosuke chapter 12 . 6/28
just say it's slight au, but yeah the Naruto history is f-ed up
Yurei Kyosuke chapter 10 . 6/28
my question, are these cats summon the same clan that the Uchiha knows or are they different?
Korjax chapter 64 . 6/2
Just finished the story. It’s a fun one, filled with a lot of humor. The fight scenes were very enjoyable as well. Being detailed enough to be interesting and engaging, without falling into the trap of dragging on. The real shine of the story is the dialogue between the characters, it just flowed incredibly well for me. My only criticism is I wish the man OC/SI was a bit stronger at times. I enjoyed her personality, I just wish there were a few more instances of her stealing the scene skill/power wise, but that’s a minor complaint. Definitely worth a read if you’re looking for a longer length story.
VeldoraSimpNr1 chapter 10 . 4/15
Awwww bummer
Still love this story though ️
VeldoraSimpNr1 chapter 9 . 4/15
Do both
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