| Reviews for Clearing Mist |
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   Ricardo Medina chapter 12 . 12/2/2024 el tiempo de la historia esta re mal |
| Spade Zi chapter 20 . 11/9/2024 Ano, it's Yugakure |
| pianeti chapter 60 . 7/6/2024 obitobi u forgot to freeze the cat (i dont skin cats im talking about taxidermy) (also, in taking out the innards of the meow meow, there's no particular order) (still talking about taxidermy) |
| Yuyami Yuri chapter 64 . 5/16/2024 I don't know if you still check your account but I decided to leave a loyalty comment here. Your fic was the first non-Konoha centric story I've read and I absolutely love what you've done with it. You included drama, humour and wordbuilding. This is also the first story in this fandom I've read more than once. I like both your OC/SI and Kisame and your ways of deviating the events from the canon plotline. Thank you for sharing your work. |
| CMdkelley chapter 19 . 4/4/2024 This is what ive been confused about... you said here that the third war is what is helping them hide from mist, Madara was stuck in the geddo statue at this time, Obito was taken at the very end of the third war nor did he give up on konaha till after rins death after the war was over during that ambigous time period that minato was hokage. So how is Obito already controlling Yagura? It would make more sense to say the civil war is what helped them hide |
| Cliff chapter 3 . 12/30/2023 Akira-San is devious lol |
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/30/2023 poor croc. :( but this isss a good story and i like it! |
| Iyawolfwhite chapter 64 . 10/18/2023 Loved it! |
| CampPillow chapter 49 . 8/14/2023 I wonder if there'll be a reunion of Team Ao and Genma, Kurenai, and Gai |
| CampPillow chapter 41 . 8/14/2023 I love how each pair had a partner to blame for potentially triggering the trap XDD |
| CampPillow chapter 29 . 8/13/2023 these gray cloaks sounds amazing! I wonder if anyone has made any fanart yet? |
| Guest chapter 55 . 8/2/2023 I feel like you nerfed Kisame a bit in the fanfic I mean the dude is capable of creating a bubble of water as big as an entire forest with a 30% chakra clone and forcing Gai to open the 7th gate to take him down. Kisame in this fic rarely uses his signature shark bomb jutsu and feels much weaker than his canon version. |
| Guest chapter 52 . 8/2/2023 Isn't Isobu in a pocket dimension that only he can access? I don't think even obito with his kamui can get in since its a separate dimension from the kamui realm so obito can't teleport in |
| Guest chapter 48 . 8/2/2023 Why doesn't Itachi use his Susanoo more? With the hax that is the yata mirror and totsuka blade he could one shot most akatsuki members if he used it more often. |
| Yurei Kyosuke chapter 55 . 7/5/2023 why would the anbu capture them if the leader themselves are waiting for them? that kind of weird |