|Reviews for Clearing Mist|
| ChopSuzi chapter 64 . 10/13
I finally found this again! My computer crapped out when I was partway through a couple years ago. I just happened across it again a couple days ago and I'm just so happy! This is even better than I'd hoped it'd be! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
| Moo chapter 64 . 10/11
Oh gosh...where to start! This. Was. Amazing. Couldn't put it down. Good Job!
| Tree-kid-No2 chapter 1 . 9/29
I've lost count of how many times I've re-read this fic, that's how much I love it. I know it's been ages since this was finished, but I just wanted to say that it's such a pleasure to read it over and over again, and I shall probably find myself reading it again in the very near future. So, I just wanted to thank you for writing such an awesome fic! Have a great rest of your day!
| Kyoya hatake chapter 57 . 9/26
Ne, I want to know how Minato reacted to Naru-chan's Kaa-chan and Tou-san
| Leftwich08 chapter 47 . 9/23
Why does everyone care about word count what I look at is look at the amount of chapters not that cause ya have to take authors notes and disclaimers anyway so why bother
| Leftwich08 chapter 19 . 9/23
| Leftwich08 chapter 12 . 9/23
*clutching my head* was not confused till you gave the facts list cause I never paid that much attention to detail
| Leftwich08 chapter 9 . 9/23
I really hope you did both... Having that level of control being a sensor should be easy I'd guess... As for the second part... KITTIES!
| Leftwich08 chapter 8 . 9/22
A note on your author's note... Your fight scene was fine honestly lol it wasn't over dramatized or anything like that and you pointed out the one thing they didn't focus on at all early on and she fought from a distance so mentioning the other techniques are pointless and on top of that she wouldn't be focusing on the faces with a let's get this over with mentality so the opponents being nondescript is expected although some fleshing on what she was dealing with wouldn't have been bad... Like perhaps some more on the mental preparations and what was coming her way that she did have to deal with or it could be kept emotional and show an internal struggle to keep herself uncaring till the end... I honestly expected her to form a sort of dual personality where she is like a wildcat in battle and then represses that part and becomes her normal self after kinda like haku mentioned becoming a true shinobi in canon... Although one complaint I do have is the individual "scenes" as I'm thinking of them are kinda short and seem to I guess you'd say lack depth but I don't wanna say that cause it feels off... I'll have to ask Caitlyn how to describe it but I'm having a hard time immersing myself in the story cause it jumps from scene to scene so quickly but don't get me wrong I am enjoying it nonetheless
| Leftwich08 chapter 7 . 9/22
... *is picturing kisame on my Pokemon team instead of my speed boost Blaziken*... The current weirdness in my head... Is your fault... I have even decided on evolutions... Chibi shark to genin shark at level 25 and then to swordsman shark at level fourty... I hate you right now... *Suddenly pictures a Charizard breathing out an amaterasu jutsu* all... Your... Fault...
| Leftwich08 chapter 3 . 9/22
But but but... I don't wanna save the chibi shark... I want the plotting mother to succeed...
| KnellaLuna chapter 64 . 9/18
sleep is a thing of the past, but I can honestly say that this is the best Naruto fic I have ever read. I laughed, I cried, I got little to no sleep, but I loved it!
| KnellaLuna chapter 34 . 9/17
it's fucking 3 in the morning and I can't stop reading! going strong for 6 hours! why is this so good?!
| Hopeless Echo chapter 3 . 9/2
I stop reading to glance up at my sister, a large, chesire grin plastered on my face with superglue, "Stop what?"
My sister flinched, "That. Stop smiling weirdly." She quickly looked back to her computer. "It'll creep people out."
I pouted, "Fine; I'll smile like a weirdo somewhere else."
I decided to visit the park instead and continued reading.
Any screams you may have heard after that had absolutely NOTHING to do with me. NOTHING.
| Guest chapter 64 . 8/31
I've been looking for a satisfying version of "Naruto fan enters Narutoverse and changes the story", I'm glad I stumbled upon this one. It was exactly what I was looking for, without being too cliché and realistically followed the plot. I loved the happy ending