Reviews for Clearing Mist
Guest chapter 31 . 9/17
Again, I don’t get why Toki is so soft with the Konoha nin. Remember she got over her fear/dislike of killing so it don’t make no sense. Konoha wouldn’t hold it against her later on anyways, since they attacked her! I don’t like that she let them take her in. I wanted her to kick their butts!
Guest chapter 30 . 9/17
Meh kisame should have had a better argument. About her being too soft for the Konoha nun. I she should have fought them off, if not killed them if necessary. She literally didn’t need to risk that at all. I’m on kisame’s side.
Guest chapter 29 . 9/17
Ugh she shoulda just fought them off lol
Guest chapter 22 . 9/16
Btw it’s yugakure not yagakure
And godaime not gondaime. Other than that you’re doing really well!
Guest chapter 21 . 9/16
I think hidans alright
Guest chapter 17 . 9/16
Can’t wait till they get married...oooh husband sounds sooo much nicer than boyfriend..isn’t it?
Guest chapter 16 . 9/16
I wonder what Hidan would think of her calling upon Jashin so much...
Guest chapter 9 . 9/16
If the cat summons had some weird death affiliation like the nibi that would be sooooo cool. Well if you choose to do that...
Guest chapter 8 . 9/16
Don’t worry much about the fights. They aren’t really why I’m reading the story, and they’re alright ish anyways.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/16
Oh my this is too cute! My only problem is the formatting of dialogue. I think you put the full stops in the speech marks. Like how you use the question marks.
Eg.
“Hello! How are you?”
“Your hair is too soft Kisame.”
Also when it’s in the middle of a sentence use a comma!
Guest chapter 15 . 9/6
I take back what I said please forgive me
cadethenurse chapter 11 . 9/6
Does the mc have some sort of kekkai genkai that makes her emotionally retarded? I swear she has dense protagonist disease, it’s frankly annoying
L1mitless chapter 3 . 8/29
I didn't even realise that the MC was a girl until that Akira's POV...
Slurpius chapter 64 . 8/20
Very enjoyable read
ichbinnureinnutzer chapter 32 . 8/18
Hidan's and Toki's conversation about Jashin is one of the first things I remember when I think of this story. Though I mixed up my memories of this one with the one where the protagonist invents the "Goggle Gods"...
Whatever, I still love rereading this story from time to time..
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