Reviews for Clearing Mist
Nerfhearder69 chapter 64 . 10/5
Enjoyed the humor. Loved the character development. Was enthralled by the story. Thank you for all the work you put into it.
sakuzi-chan chapter 34 . 9/28
Seriously hilarious. thanks for the laughs!
Rhaegar Targaryen chapter 13 . 9/24
Okay genin, as part of your chuunin exam, go and either defeat, outwit or outsneak a camp full of jounin.

Now why is it that I have trouble accepting this?
Rhaegar Targaryen chapter 6 . 9/24
Why have you changed the mist graduation exam to this? It just makes no sense what so ever.
Sansho chapter 64 . 9/22
This... Wow.
This is, hands down, the BEST "let's-screw-cannon-over-with-seer-like-knowledge" trope I've ever read. And with such an unusual pairing no less.

Putting your OC in Kiri, of all places, was a stroke of genius. You developed the seemingly familiar plot with expertise, all the while maintaining an awesome balance of humor and fangirling :P

This story is so epic, that I was itching to reread it even BEFORE I've finished going through it all.

One point to notice, though, is perhaps acquiring a beta and cleaning up some language issues that I've come across. Other than that, perfection.

Thank you so much for such an awesome story!
Guest chapter 64 . 9/20
read it all good work
ShineX chapter 3 . 9/19
Why were the day intervals so short? Didn't it take quite a bit of time for Naruto to be able to do anything with his element? How the hell would such a small number of days allow that here?
duchessliz chapter 64 . 9/18
This is definitely one of the best SI/OC fics on the site and I loved it! Thanks for sharing! :D
duchessliz chapter 43 . 9/18
Aww how sweet! Itachi realized that the craziness that is YĆ«gure is his home!
duchessliz chapter 32 . 9/18
T-t-the Omake got me again lol. Toki is a Jashinist and didn't even realize it! xD
duchessliz chapter 28 . 9/18
T-t-the Omake ... bwahahaha! Priceless! xD
duchessliz chapter 21 . 9/18
lol. I always loved the fights between Hidan and Kakuzu! xD
duchessliz chapter 14 . 9/18
On the bright side, at least she know that Kurenai specializes in genjutsu ... thats something at least.
Houshikun001 chapter 64 . 9/17
You are so awesome, loved your story and I'm looking forward to reading your other works.
seanklovett chapter 64 . 9/15
Ok I admit, this is one of my favorite self inserts, very funny and original, and still has action. I always thought Kisame deserved a better ending in canon. Good work.
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