Reviews for Half Moon
mofokz chapter 1 . 8/1
Lol you had me, but I have absolutely no idea where you lost me. And when I thought you had me, you lost me again. Plus is it weird that when Naruto pov came by I felt like it was some type of poem. Like that type of poem I can never understand. Dark. Light. Sun *hands spread out*... Moon *fist on chest*. That's what it feels like. But as much as I didn't understand half the story, it was good.
emowoods205 chapter 7 . 10/6/2017
Yeah it's not completed and probably won't ever be completed since you haven't updated it since 2016 so yeah I'm just going to settle for this as an ending thanks for writing such a great book!
emowoods205 chapter 7 . 10/6/2017
Oh no I'm not going to read the sequel even though I really want to but only because it's probably not completed...
emowoods205 chapter 6 . 10/6/2017
Sasuke is being annoyingly stubborn. Poor Naruto he just wants Sasuke to know that he's sorry even though I'm pretty sure Sasuke is Esuka's reincarnation. Orochimaru is the reincarnation of the man who oh so long ago tried to keep Naruto as a pet... Are Iruka, Kakashi, and Sasuke retarded why the f*ck would they leave Naruto alone! I knew Esuka was the one who saved Naruto all those years ago! I knew they were all Reincarnations of the past! XD Itachi knew all along..he really did take pictures and send them to Deidara...XD...GOD I F*CKING HATE OROCHIMARU! Minato/Arashi has a right to be f*cking pissed! Naruto really loves Esuka/Sasuke...just wanting to apologise and for Sasuke/Esuka to know that he's sorry...as he might be dying so sad...I'm glad Naruto is still able to transform into a fox and a half fox/human...too bad his other powers are going to be gone for awhile..I wonder how Mikoto and Fugaku are taking all of this? Also when are Naruto and Sasuke going to kiss and finally make love?
emowoods205 chapter 5 . 10/6/2017
Awee Esuka was such a sweetheart...He was obviously in love with Naruto...Esuka was such a beautiful soul...im glad Esuka was Narutos lover...I'm so sad that Naruto had lost Esuka...Thinking the entire time that he was alive but in reality he died...I hope Sasuke is really Esuka's reincarnation...I mean Sasuke did have that memory of him and Naruto all those years ago...So he must be the reincarnation of Esuka...Sasuke is falling in love with Naruto... Naruto literally acts like a fox and I love it! Stupid f*cking Orochimaru! Sasuke needs to be more nicer to Naruto...Naruto is in denial that Sasuke isn't his lover...He misses his lover can't Sasuke see...I can't believe Minato came down in all his beauty just to glare at Sasuke for hurting his son...Sasuke should really apologize and try to explain to Naruto more nicely...Poor Naruto..
emowoods205 chapter 4 . 10/6/2017
Itachi is fucking boss when it comes to Sasuke and Deidara XD he roasted Fugaku. Naruto is so adorable I think Esuka might be the boy who freed Naruto back when he got caught and was going to become a pet? Maybe Sasuke is Esuksa's Reincarnation? Stupid Orochimaru and Kabuto hurting my baby! I'm glad Iruka and Kakashi are going to help.
emowoods205 chapter 3 . 10/6/2017
Sakura seems pretty cool. Sasuke obviously has a little crush on the fox already. Itachi I can't wait to see what he has to say. Naruto needs to wake up soon!
emowoods205 chapter 2 . 10/5/2017
Sasuke must be getting the feeling that the story is true. I love the little story by the way it's very interesting. Is Naruto the fox or is he just another fox? I bet Kakashi, Iruka and the other servers know the story is true.
emowoods205 chapter 1 . 10/5/2017
Sasuke seems like Canon Sasuke even down to the closet gay part. (See what I did there? XD) And Naruto he sounds like a animal observing humans.
OrangeJellyfish chapter 7 . 11/24/2015
I like Ekusa better.. :/
OrangeJellyfish chapter 6 . 11/24/2015
Aww thats so cute! Fucking Orochimaru!
OrangeJellyfish chapter 2 . 11/23/2015
Wait what?! What happened to Naru-chan? O.O
OrangeJellyfish chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Yes speaking is so very strange. Make sounds of understanding...
NaruxSasu2011 chapter 5 . 8/21/2015
Omg I have to say I am hooked!
The part with the FOB song was great! I found myself singing the rest :3
seireidoragon chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
This is a really well done story and I can't wait to start the sequel! I was wondering if Kurama would show up more in the second one. He's mentioned here but it doesn't really state his relationship with Naruto.
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