Reviews for The 14th Room
Piggypig213 chapter 14 . 7/17/2015
Hold on what was the goddamn suprise?! Did I miss it? Was it there and I just didn't read it?! This is going to eat me for forever! It can't be the donuts because you can't fit a box of donuts in your pocket, I mean maybe you can... I don't know what type of pants you wear but mine don't even have real pockets let alone pockets that big! Aside from my u satisfied curiosity that was an adorable ending I loved the story and girl! Let me tell you! LaviXAllen FOREVER! They will never break up and they will get married and adopt children and teach them how not to be put in IA's it'll be great girl! LOL
Piggypig213 chapter 8 . 7/17/2015
There are a few mistakes here (ch.8) I noticed for example the lock, you said it was suspicious and no other patients had them but Roads story said she locked her door for dress up. Other then those though (there were like 2 that's it lol) the chapter is perfect just like the rest :)
YaoiFanGirl1990 chapter 14 . 2/12/2015
So cute! Amazing story!
Wolfcarnage chapter 14 . 1/22/2015
Omfg here it is at 1:40 in the morning and sadly at the ending of this fladorable chappie. You did great on this and imma read it many times over! -crawls in corner and rereads all chappies- Such pawsomeness
Natsuki D chapter 14 . 10/15/2014
hwd they get away with just a kiss
awesome fanfic _
Word.Vomit20 chapter 14 . 10/11/2014
Hello there... I'd like to say first that I loved this story u (you're such an amazing writer, don't give it up no matter what Tyki says XD ) and that if you're still looking for ideals on what to write, I think it's be really funny if the gang (of -man) met Slenderman or something like that XD
figendog chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
road was so creepy.
like, creepy-er than normal.
and that's sayin' somethin'.
though having a stabbing war with tour uncle does seem pretty fun
lol jk
blueraven7227 chapter 14 . 8/17/2014
I swear, it seems like all of your stories are the best! I absolutely loved First Impressions (and have read it all the way through at least three times now) and I finally got the chance to finish this story and it was fantastic. Although I feel like fluffier fics are always good at 2 in the morning, but meh, you're stories are still awesome.
Firediva0 chapter 14 . 8/10/2014
Aw this is so cute! I'm sad its over but I really do love this fic! Don't forget to mark it complete. I look forward to your Yullen fic by the way.
Shirubagure chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
You have? I haven't been on Facebook for a long while now that I think of it. Lol at Tyki for the award thing and for complaining about him being only mentioned once. xP
TriforceNinja chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
I like the ending. It's so cute.
So, Laven week is coming up? That's awesome!
I'll try to update a Laven fic during that week, but I would like to see you submission, too. :D
VeridianSoul chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
Im so glad this was updated it was so fluffy X3 i can't wait to see your submission for laven week!
Guest chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
Loved it and I agree that this is a nice ending/epilogue for the fic. One thing to point out though is that when lavi and Allen are having hot chocolate at one point you call it coffee. Just a typo/mind-slip-thingy but I thought you would like to know!
XxlavenloverxX chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
Yey! I was so happy when I saw this updated, and that you'll read it! I can't wait for your next story. Have a great day!
dcdc123 chapter 14 . 7/27/2014
do you think you can PM me when you post your next story please.
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