|Reviews for Cease to Exist|
| Carol542 chapter 9 . 7/15/2018
Love it please continue this story soon I really really like it
| bassoongirl14 chapter 9 . 3/8/2016
I totally love this so much! I can't wait for more!
| KeegSlytherin chapter 9 . 10/27/2014
Awesome story. I just went through all the chapters and I can safely say it is becoming one of my favourites! It is well written and well rounded and the plot is very interesting, the characters are spot on... In one word, perfect :)
I hope that you will update sometime soon :)
| Paxloria chapter 9 . 10/11/2014
Yeah, Sirius NEEDS to start playing it smart and do some planning!
| Paxloria chapter 7 . 10/11/2014
| Paxloria chapter 6 . 10/11/2014
There's some trouble in making who's-point-of-views clear to the reader, but the details of the story are clearly expressed & easy to understand.
| Paxloria chapter 3 . 10/10/2014
I couldn't follow some of the reasoning, but I liked the result.
| gemava chapter 9 . 10/10/2014
oooh cant wait for the sirius harry reunion.
| Belle'Masque chapter 9 . 9/28/2014
I can't wait for the reunion!
Really enjoying the story :D
Dying for more! ;D
| Dark Serpent Cat chapter 9 . 7/13/2014
Well this is an interesting story although it leans too closely to Evil Dumbledore, Evil Hermione and Evil Weasley's for my taste.
Personally I always preferred the Manipulative, Greater Good, Dumbledore who just uses legilimency and other such things to manipulate Ron, Ginny and Hermione like in Harry Potter and the Descent into Darkness by Athey. To me that just seems more believable and in character and you don't have to bash them to get rid of them just have Harry grow apart due to things such as growing up.
I also don't think Dumbledore stole from Harry as for, as again, I prefer Manipulative Dumbledore and I think stealing crosses the line even for him.
Still good job on Severus' character but please don't just ignore a lot of his meaner qualities as well like so many fics do. I always believed that if you are changing a character do it in a believable way through story progression. For example a lot of Severitus fic make Snape look like a complete good guy if somewhat sarcastic and witty and forget that he can be a big bully. In my eyes if one wants to do Severitus then it should be a struggle for Snape to get past James at first. However I find yours tasteful all the same
| Crimson Reiter chapter 9 . 6/17/2014
Will have Harry the same Zanpaku-tō than in psychoticKisshu's version? , Because i really don't see Harry with a Ice-based sword, but yes something like Fire, Magic/Kido o both ...But again, you're the autor xD
Sorry about my bad english D:
| GreenDrkness chapter 9 . 5/15/2014
Aw I wanted more Harry
Will there be a time skip soon for the canon?
Keep on the writes
| Winter's Folly chapter 9 . 5/11/2014
| Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 9 . 5/9/2014
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 9 . 5/8/2014
I like it! **