Reviews for Unraveling Rin
dust and starlight chapter 1 . 2/12
Oh my. XD This was really, really, satisfying. What great writing and tension build-up! I was only a fan of this pair in passing, but maybe I should reconsider lol.
Apple Lullaby chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Gosh, I really think you deserve a lot more reviews!

In short, this was beautifully written. I like it a lot when Nitori is not completely shy and innocent and squeals whenever he so much as hears the word sex. You portrayed him very well; I especially enjoyed reading his thoughts, they made me smile a few times.

Thank you for writing this delicious little fic!
nitorii chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Really great job on this! It was very well paced and beautifully written; I liked the fact that you added more depth to the story than just sexy times and you managed to make the moment meaningful. Also, both characters you featured were perfectly in character.

Spot on, dear! Keep up the great work :)
Uikjaki chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Wow really really really nice and *satisfying* story! I want more Free! M fics! :D