|Reviews for Our Sin|
| Mae chapter 2 . 1/28
This is so good and so sad at the same time that I don't know what to say! I'm reading the book and I don't know the end yet but while I'm reading this I would love this to be the grand finale! Good work!
| DancesWithElves chapter 2 . 1/12
I never cry when I read fanfiction - yet you seemed to have bewitched this entry to induce sorrow in its readers. A very well-written and beautiful piece, fair author. Thank you.
| Haruka2007 chapter 2 . 1/8
Man I hate Tolkien for doing this, killing all three! What was the point of their quest if they all die?! It makes it all look pointless in my eyes, can't forgive him for such a horrible ending. Poor Thorin, Fili and Kili :(
| ash chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
loved this, it was really well written
| Dancing Dollface chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
Good, but elves don't sleep.
| RagdollPrincess chapter 2 . 12/27/2013
Well that was heartbreaking. Well written and nicely angst ridden tho :D
| RagdollPrincess chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
This is perfect! It's just how I imagined sex for them would be and how their personalities intertwined! It was very natural to read!
| Ireth Melwasul chapter 2 . 12/25/2013
| iiiii chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Hurry up, your story is amazing!
This is so good!
I wasn't expecting that. Update soon!