|Reviews for Moving Forward|
| Sessha Lebeau chapter 3 . 3/7
I'm in love with this, Will you continue on with this universe(I think you haven't name it yet)?
| Lattelady chapter 3 . 2/22
Excellent story. It is so much better than what we were given on the show.
You wrote Neal very well. You kept a good balance between his anger, hurt and need to real love his father. Needless to say I loved the Rum/Belle sections.
I loved you creative way of getting rid of Cora without killing her, beautifully done.
Is there a story between this one and The Roles We Play?
| JC chapter 3 . 2/11
Awesome, amazing, and enjoyable.
| LynRward chapter 3 . 1/9
This was so good and the last chapter was Brilliant, loved it.
| liebedero chapter 3 . 1/2
This chapter was fantastic!
| sonotalady chapter 3 . 1/2
So great and the ending! I loved this story and all of the connecting ones:) Feel freee to do another short sequel whenever you feel if it contains this stuff:) Three generations of Rumple indeed and Emma and Belle bonding:D
| LaurieAHancock chapter 3 . 1/1
This story makes me smile and gives me hope. Thank you.
| EevyLynn chapter 3 . 1/1
I love it so much! I really hope you continue in this verse.
| Grace5231973 chapter 3 . 1/1
I am guessing the fourth generation will be showing up too? I mean Malcolm/Pan! Hurry back! Happy New Year! Thanks for this!
| SkyBlueSw chapter 3 . 1/1
Are you going to write a sequel to this? Happy that Neal is on the road to forgivin Father.
| cheesyteal'c chapter 3 . 1/1
Jeez three gens of rumple...poor Emma poor belle lol nice job
| c.cook13 chapter 3 . 1/1
Such a cutely wonderful chapter
| Lattelady chapter 2 . 12/31/2013
This is amazing. I love that it has been from Neal's POV so far. .I'm so happy that I found it.
| MyraValhallah chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
Feels like there's a lot missing- I'm a little confused by the lack of the first half of season two, or are you going to write it as flashbacks?
| Hyourin chapter 2 . 12/30/2013