Reviews for Team 7's Ascension: Blood Wings
skdmll'aWD chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Bad ass. Really hope you continue it.
Darkskeleton chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Naruto is already weak WITH the shadow clone. Without them he is even worse. Why would you take it away ? It's his only useful skill at this point in time.
And that technique is like, his trademark jutsu.
Still, it's well written. Good luck for the next chapter
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Kakashi has gone loco. I pray for them, I truly do.
obscurereader chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Awesome start! I can't wait to see what changes in this re-write. Although I do have one concern. Please don't fall prey to the "Council" cliche. Especially one that has civilians. The only "Council" is Homura Mitokado and Koharu Utatane. And they only serve the Hokage in an advisory capacity. All decisions are still up to the Hokage. The council doesn't have any real authority, just experience. Civilians have absolutely no influence on the Hokage's decisions.
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