Reviews for The Pain of Change
Guest chapter 8 . 1/13/2016
Can you finish the story? PLEASE!
lkspires chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
You have the beginnings of what I feel be a very great story; please continue.
wotumba1 chapter 8 . 2/22/2014
... and you have to give it to neal, toronto's a great city!

will peter find them in time before peterson can get really nasty?
JeanneZ84 chapter 8 . 2/21/2014
UPDATE SOON!

JeanneZ84
JeanneZ84 chapter 7 . 2/21/2014
Get there soon Peter.

JeanneZ84
dsl116 chapter 8 . 2/21/2014
Oh you had me at chapter 1 and I read all 8 chapters he same night. Hungry for more.
Excellent plot/story!
JackiLeigh chapter 7 . 2/19/2014
I am really enjoying this story. The angst factor is awesome. I hope Peter can 'fix' things when Neal gets back.
JanJoy chapter 7 . 2/16/2014
I just caught up since my last review. The story is progressing well :) Mozzie is such a dear-he's trying to be understanding of Neal's moodiness but he's also getting a bit impatient (so him!). I really like how both Peter and Neal keep tearing up over their memories of each other. They share such a strong bond of friendship that we can only hope that Peter comes to Neal's rescue soon, before he gets too mixed up with Peterson. I don't like this Peterson guy at all. No one probably gets caught by the authorities on his jobs because he is probably the one killing them off or blackmailing them somehow. He is obviously trouble! It was encouraging when the Buffalo detective suggested the border crossing theory...at least Peter is on the right track now...YaY!
daisesndaffidols chapter 7 . 2/3/2014
I have a bad feeling that Peterson is going to be very bad news for Neal and Mozzie.. and I don't know how I feel about Peter following Neal.. maybe sometimes, it's time to throw in the towel
LvSammy chapter 7 . 2/2/2014
OMG...gonna just die now...omg this is amazing. MOre soon okay!
BlueDiamondStar chapter 7 . 2/2/2014
Intriguing!
wotumba1 chapter 7 . 2/2/2014
so peter has a trail and an instinct to follow...

what about peterson?
Albaid chapter 7 . 2/1/2014
This keep getting more interesting with every clhapter.
govgal chapter 7 . 2/1/2014
Uh oh
LvSammy chapter 6 . 1/20/2014
wow...so far so good...this is awesome...keep up the great work!
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